Thanks Eric,

Suggestions noted. White paper only has a focus on Digital
Surveillance laws therefore we restricted ourselves to the laws for
now. We are working on another brief adding examples of abuse. Will be
sharing shortly.

Thanks for the feedback.

Best,
Nighat

On Sun, Nov 30, 2014 at 4:25 PM, Eric S Johnson <[email protected]> wrote:
> Nighat, I found it difficult to read this document in the window provided on
> your site via the link below, so I clicked on “download a copy,” which gave
> me a DOC. When I opened the DOC, I found it still had some comments in it
> (like “for me this section doesn’t add anything. I would consider cutting
> it”)—you might want to clean that up.
>
>
>
> Re the contents of the White Paper—an interesting read, but I wondered
> whether it could’ve been richer if it provided any examples of abuse.
> Without examples, it feels a little theoretical, abstract.
>
>
>
> Best,
>
> Eric
>
>
>
> From: liberationtech [mailto:[email protected]] On
> Behalf Of Nighat Dad
> Sent: Friday, November 28, 2014 03.03
> To: [email protected]
> Subject: [liberationtech] White Paper on digital surveillance laws in
> Pakistan
>
>
>
> Hello all,
>
> We have released a white paper on digital surveillance laws and practices in
> Pakistan. Read here http://jasoosibandkaro.pk/whitepaper/
>
>
>
> Looking forward to hear your feedback.
>
>
>
>
>
> --
>
> Best,
> Nighat Dad
> Executive Director,
> Digital Rights Foundation
> www.digitalrightsfoundation.pk
> Twitter: nighatdad
> Skype: nighat.dad
> Phone: +92 321 4815252
>
>
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