At the suggestion of readers of license-discuss, I have made two more changes to draft version of the OSL.
1. In the definition of Source Code, I have clarified that documentation to modify the Original Work -- but not documentation to "access" it -- is what must be provided. 2. In the definition of External Deployment, I have narrowed the definition by removing the phrase "or used to provide services or otherwise deliver content to anyone other than You." Quite a few people believed this requirement was too encompassing and that it would inhibit the acceptance of open source software. The latest version is at www.rosenlaw.com/osl1.1.html. /Larry Rosen -- license-discuss archive is at http://crynwr.com/cgi-bin/ezmlm-cgi?3