On Fri, Oct 9, 2009 at 3:18 AM, Trevor Daniels <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Andrew > > Generally looking good. A few comments, mostly minor: > > a) Page 2 has the phrase "Not let down, we created a font of musical > symbols" > "Not to be deterred," or "Undiscouraged," would be better. > > b) Where you compare the shapes of the quarter rests on page 2 it might be > better to draw attention to the three sharp points in the middle, as the one > at the bottom seems to exhibit the point :) being made the least. > > c) Page 3: the last para of the text immediately below the first music > example has the references to the two examples the wrong way round - the > _lower_ measures contain the correction. > > d) Page 5, where you compare Lily 1.4 output, I suggest you make it clear > when 1.4 is first mentioned that this is a very old version. This would not > be immediately obvious to someone coming to LilyPond for the first time. > > Trevor
Thanks for the detailed proofreading! The changes will appear in my next patch. Andrew _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list [email protected] http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel
