Looks fine generally, but some editorial changes are needed.
Trevor http://codereview.appspot.com/2735044/diff/1/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely File Documentation/notation/pitches.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/2735044/diff/1/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely#newcode459 Documentation/notation/pitches.itely:459: @item @file{nederlands} As these and the following similar cases are no longer files I think @code{nederlands} would be more appropriate. http://codereview.appspot.com/2735044/diff/1/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely#newcode564 Documentation/notation/pitches.itely:564: Western classical music, also referred to as @q{Common Practice It would be good to have a Glossary entry for CPP http://codereview.appspot.com/2735044/diff/1/Documentation/notation/world.itely File Documentation/notation/world.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/2735044/diff/1/Documentation/notation/world.itely#newcode31 Documentation/notation/world.itely:31: traditional musics) employ alternative or extended tuning Don't use 'musics' - it's not English. 'Many non-Western styles of music (and some Western folk and traditional styles) employ ...' http://codereview.appspot.com/2735044/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list [email protected] http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel
