Looks almost perfect!

http://codereview.appspot.com/4169053/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely
File Documentation/notation/input.itely (right):

http://codereview.appspot.com/4169053/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode1340
Documentation/notation/input.itely:1340: Global settings can be kept in
separate files, which are selected
How about:
Global settings can be included from a separate file:

(global settings can also be kept in a separate file and included with
\include, so I'm not fond of that "... which are selected" bit.  Also, I
don't think it's necessary. and this change would give us 9 words
instead of 15 words)

http://codereview.appspot.com/4169053/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode1353
Documentation/notation/input.itely:1353: See @rlearning{Style sheets}
On 2011/02/14 18:00:09, Jlowe wrote:
This also needs its own @seealso entry.

also, a final period.  It might also be good to wrap it into the
previous sentence, i.e. "... use of style sheets, as discussed in
@rlearning{Style sheets}.".

http://codereview.appspot.com/4169053/

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