Looks almost perfect!
http://codereview.appspot.com/4169053/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely File Documentation/notation/input.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/4169053/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode1340 Documentation/notation/input.itely:1340: Global settings can be kept in separate files, which are selected How about: Global settings can be included from a separate file: (global settings can also be kept in a separate file and included with \include, so I'm not fond of that "... which are selected" bit. Also, I don't think it's necessary. and this change would give us 9 words instead of 15 words) http://codereview.appspot.com/4169053/diff/1/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode1353 Documentation/notation/input.itely:1353: See @rlearning{Style sheets} On 2011/02/14 18:00:09, Jlowe wrote:
This also needs its own @seealso entry.
also, a final period. It might also be good to wrap it into the previous sentence, i.e. "... use of style sheets, as discussed in @rlearning{Style sheets}.". http://codereview.appspot.com/4169053/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel