Reviewers: ,
Message:
The description for rallentando only said that it's an Italian word.
Provide better descriptions for ritardando and rallentando, contrast
them to each other and add references in both directions.
Description:
Docs: Explain the difference between ritardando and rallentando
Please review this at http://codereview.appspot.com/5544075/
Affected files:
M Documentation/music-glossary.tely
Index: Documentation/music-glossary.tely
diff --git a/Documentation/music-glossary.tely
b/Documentation/music-glossary.tely
index
5f113dda908f83874e7e4ff89ba346948dde190d..b2df038dc722d5ec91047f054db0d7c9e0ccfe1f
100644
--- a/Documentation/music-glossary.tely
+++ b/Documentation/music-glossary.tely
@@ -6644,7 +6644,10 @@ DK: rallentando,
S: rallentando,
FI: rallerdando, hidastuen.
-[Italian] A performance indication, abbreviated @notation{rall.}
+[Italian: @q{slowing down}]
+
+Slackening in speed, more gradual than @ref{ritardando}. Abbreviated
+to @notation{rall.}
@seealso
@ref{ritardando}.
@@ -6770,11 +6773,13 @@ DK: ritardando,
S: ritardando,
FI: ritardando, hidastuen,
-Gradually slackening in speed. Mostly abbreviated to @notation{rit.} or
-@notation{ritard}.
+[Italian: @q{lagging}]
+
+Gradual slowing down, more pronounced than @ref{rallentando}. Mostly
+abbreviated to @notation{rit.} or @notation{ritard}.
@seealso
-No cross-references.
+@ref{rallentando}.
@node ritenuto
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