A couple of these changes are actually misleading, so I think they at least should be corrected.
Trevor http://codereview.appspot.com/5976056/diff/1/Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely File Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/5976056/diff/1/Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely#newcode1415 Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely:1415: @cindex beams, unmetered music I think there should be index entries leading to this section starting from both bar line and bar number, as before. Why delete them? http://codereview.appspot.com/5976056/diff/1/Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely#newcode1422 Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely:1422: In metered music, measures are calculated automatically for bar lines I don't know what "calculating measures" means. Perhaps say, "In metered music bar lines are inserted and bar numbers are calculated automatically." http://codereview.appspot.com/5976056/diff/1/Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely#newcode1450 Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely:1450: Cadenzas are treated as a @q{single measure} of music, even if one or No, they can be shorter and within a measure of music. Perhaps say, "A new bar is never started within a cadenza, even if one or more @code{\bar} commands are inserted within it." http://codereview.appspot.com/5976056/diff/1/Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely#newcode1478 Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely:1478: These commands affect all staves in the score, even when placed in just We conventionally use the term "predefined commands" to refer to commands defined in ly/property-init.ly. http://codereview.appspot.com/5976056/diff/1/Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely#newcode1512 Documentation/notation/rhythms.itely:1512: In unmetered music, line and page breaks will only occur at a bar line, This is true generally, not just in unmetered music. "Automatic line and page breaks are inserted only at bar lines, so @q{invisible} bar lines will need to be inserted manually in long stretches of unmetered music to permit breaking:" http://codereview.appspot.com/5976056/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list [email protected] https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel
