Mostly LGTM. Better idea than putting the stuff in a doc-string for a \placeholder function people would hardly ever use.
If you really don't like the extra @cindex that's fine. The other changes are just stylistic things so the English reads with a better flow. Cheers, Ian http://codereview.appspot.com/6248080/diff/6001/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely File Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/6248080/diff/6001/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely#newcode82 Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely:82: @cindex placeholder events http://codereview.appspot.com/6248080/diff/6001/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely#newcode83 Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely:83: A chord acts merely as container for the notes inside and ornamentations "A chord merely acts as a container for notes inside it and and allows articulations or ornaments to be added consistently to all notes inside." http://codereview.appspot.com/6248080/diff/6001/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely#newcode84 Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely:84: added to it. As one consequence, a chord without notes inside does not "As a consequence, a ..." http://codereview.appspot.com/6248080/diff/6001/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely#newcode86 Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely:86: articulations. As another, there is considerable leeway for arranging "Furthermore, there is ..." http://codereview.appspot.com/6248080/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list [email protected] https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel
