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Sent: Tuesday, January 07, 2014 10:45 AM
Subject: Re: Web:Introduction: Rename "Our Goal" box (issue 48430043)
https://codereview.appspot.com/48430043/diff/1/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
File Documentation/web/introduction.itexi (right):
https://codereview.appspot.com/48430043/diff/1/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode14
Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:14: @subheading Our Mission
On 2014/01/07 10:17:47, PhilEHolmes wrote:
I dislike this intensely. It smacks of corporate nonsense - read the
text that
large conglomerates have under "Our mission". Please leave it as
goal, or
something similar and non-corporate.
Too bad you didn't notice that in one of my earlier
suggestions...
I did, but was not sure what you were proposing to change, as opposed to
just making suggestions.
I don't like the "Goal" because it sounds too much like
something unachieved.
Any other suggestions?
"Our goal" :-) No less achieved than a mission.
https://codereview.appspot.com/48430043/
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