Thanks Federico.
https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi File Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi (right): https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode28 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:28: be burnt to a DVD or copied into a USB stick and installed like any .. or copied to a USB ... (I don't know why, but copied 'into' doesn't sound right) :) https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode128 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:128: in the virtual machine settings: clic on @clicksequence{System @click{} Processor} 'click' not 'clic'. Also I try not to break lines when enclosed in a TexInfo command i.e. @clicksequence{....} is all on one line As it causes odd output in the PDF. Although I think this is only applies to TexInfo commands that link to other sections. https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode145 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:145: remember just one password.} @warning{If the root password is left blank when prompted, the configured user account will be be given root privileges automatically. This means that only one password needs to be remembered.} https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode156 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:156: This will take about 10 minutes in a recent computer. '..recent computer' is wrong. But I think we could just remove this line. https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode159 Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:159: When the installation is completed, just click on Continue (you 'When the installation is complete, ...' or '..has completed,..' either works. https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/source-code.itexi File Documentation/contributor/source-code.itexi (right): https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/source-code.itexi#newcode219 Documentation/contributor/source-code.itexi:219: If you are not using LilyDev >=3.1, you may need to install the If you are not using the most recent version of LilyDev ... (then we don't have to care about numbers - if someone is reading whatever version of the CG this appears in then they can assume that the version referred to here is the latest one). If they already have an earlier version LilyDev installed and are reading this then you can assume they are already up and running so this would not apply anyway. https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/diff/1/Documentation/contributor/source-code.itexi#newcode221 Documentation/contributor/source-code.itexi:221: worth it. After installation you must log out of the session "After installation you must log out, and then log back in again to enable it." (just in case someone infers this as exiting out of a terminal session they have open within their login. https://codereview.appspot.com/150830043/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list [email protected] https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel
