https://codereview.appspot.com/319150043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely
File Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/319150043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely#newcode2522
Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely:2522: [-]\offset
@var{property} @var{offsets} @var{item}
On 2017/01/23 23:52:54, thomasmorley651 wrote:
Would it be even more clear to have instead of @var{offsets} something
like
@var{offset-value} or @var{property-value}?
(Same below and in the docstring for the offset-command in
music-functions-init.ly)

Please keep in mind I'm not a native speaker, so I may be wrong here.

"offsets" works, but I could change this to "displacements" -- you know,
sort of like not using a word in its own definition.  There would also
be no confusion between noun and verb senses, since "displacements" is
only a noun.

But maybe, since the docs are supposed to be clear to native and
non-native speakers, "offset-values" or "offset-amounts" would be best?

https://codereview.appspot.com/319150043/

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