----- Original Message ----- From: "Federico Bruni" <[email protected]>
To: "lilypond-user mailinglist" <[email protected]>
Sent: Friday, March 18, 2011 7:29 AM
Subject: Usage 1.2, Environment variables: missing conjunction?


http://lilypond.org/doc/v2.13/Documentation/usage/command_002dline-usage#environment-variables

Maybe in **this sentence** something is missing?

"LILYPOND_GC_YIELD

   With this variable the memory footprint and performance can be
adjusted. **It is a percentage tunes memory management behavior**. With
higher values, the program uses more memory, with smaller values, it
uses more CPU time. The default value is 70.
"

I mean: 'tunes' should be a verb, right?
"The percentage tunes memory management...", if I've understood
correctly.

So it could be: "It is a percentage *that* tunes memory management
behaviour".
I don't know if this is good english, but I can understand it better.


What you're proposing is good English, and makes sense where the original did not.

--
Phil Holmes


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