2014-03-05 20:49 GMT+01:00 David Kastrup <[email protected]>:
>
>> I am not top-posting
>
> I want to avoid ossia staves. They seem reasonably self-evident as
> alternatives for the potentially less playable runs (probably the end is
> the clincher). But how bad are those, anyway? The Midi sounds doable.
> And I am too lazy to look for my guitar and skills.
Hi David,
others already said a lot about the guitar part.
Let me write something about the melody and distribution of the text.
I feel the melismata in the first part of the song are strange.
Why not
\version "2.18.0"
\relative {
\key d \dorian
\time 3/4
\partial 4 d'4
f2 g4 |
a4.( b8) a4 |
g2 e4 |
c4.
}
\addlyrics { A -- las, my love, you do me wrong }
as you do in the second part?
Though, it's your arrangement, your decision.
Just my 2ct
Cheers,
Harm
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