On Tue, 11 Jun 2002, Orr Dunkelman wrote:

> I've put an alpha version of the lecture I'll give in the Introduction to
> OS lecture next week at http://vipe.technion.ac.il/~orrd/lecture.ps
> comments are welcome and appriciated...

there are a _few_ language issues (imo) in a few slides, and a few
semantic issues:

slide 2 - might wish to replace "the richard stallman's GNU" with "richar
          stallman's GNU" - i _think_ the 'the' there is redundant.

slide 3 - "another field linux has evolved greatly is" - might to change
       to "another field linux has greatly evolved in is".

slide 4 - the title "where can you do with linux?" doesn't fit well.
          perhaps "what can you do with linux?"  ?

          regarding linux being used where stable OS-es are requiered -
          this is only half of the true, and might be question by people.

          why not solaris/aix/hpux...? - they are much more expensive,
          run on less hardware - mostly proprietary. solaris on PC has
          less drivers then linux. they are closed source - harder to
          customize/modify/fix/debug.

          why not freebsd/netbsd/... ? - they have much less driver
          support then linux, and much smaller industrial support - even
          if they are somewhat more stable.

slide 5 - mosix is not alone - there are many clusters that work using MPI
          or PVM - the 'beowulf' (spell?) clusters work using one of
          those.

slide 7 - in DOS, COMMAND.COM is the shell, not part of the operating
          system per ce (well, at least i think it is). the other two
          files are indeed the operating system itself.

slide 8 - in the end 'this program handle over the computer to' should be
                     "this program hands over the computer to" or
                     "this program hands the computer over to"

slide 9 - "for a x86 intel processors", the 'a' is redundant. should be:
          "for x86 inter processors", or "for a x86 intel processor".

slide 10 - "the bios can be used as a hardware interrupt handler" - this
           is just half of its I/O services. the other half is to send
           commands to the hardware. so better just state "the BIOS
           can be to access the system's basic hardware".

that's it for now.

waiting for the rest,
-- 
guy

"For world domination - press 1,
 or dial 0, and please hold, for the creator." -- nob o. dy


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