I do see a few typos at first glance:
In the intro:
-"tipical" *should be* replaced with "typical" in the first
sentence
-"with no use of PAP nor CHAP" *should be* "with no use of PAP
or CHAP"
-"directories where configuration files are, can vary from"
*should have* no comma
-The last sentence could be reworked a little. It is very
awkward.
Section 3:
-"Diald monitors this interface, and, when packets arrives, make
the ppp connection, wait it to be stablished and changes the
default gateway to this new ppp interface (usually ppp0). "
should be "Diald monitors this interface and, when packets
arrive, makes the ppp connection, waits for it to be
established
and changes the default gateway to this new ppp interface
(usually
ppp0).
-"and how many time the link must" *should be* "and how much
time the link must"
-"Finally, if there is no more trafic and the last packet up
time is over, Diald close the link." *should be" "Finally,
if there is no more traffic and the last packet up time is
over, Diald will close the link."
Section 4:
-"The firsts letters from this 2 words are not shown to avoid
worry about how this firsts letters are wrote, in capitals
or smalls." *shouldn't* have "first" in place of "firsts"
Overall, the readability is very good as is the content. Thanks a lot.
Jacob Joseph
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