* Byungchul Park <byungchul.p...@lge.com> wrote:

> I'm afraid the revision is not perfect yet. Of course, the document can
> have got much better english by others than me.
> 
> But,
> 
> I think I should enhance it as much as I can, before they can help it
> starting with a better one.
> 
> In addition, I removed verboseness as much as possible.
> 
> ----->8-----
> From c7795104ca6ac6dd9f7fd944aee23a2011a6d3a2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
> From: Byungchul Park <byungchul.p...@lge.com>
> Date: Mon, 30 Oct 2017 14:51:26 +0900
> Subject: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise
>  Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt
> 
> The document should've been written with a better readability. Revise it
> to enhance its readability.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Byungchul Park <byungchul.p...@lge.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt | 388 
> +++++++++++++++------------------

Could you please run a spellchecker over this text? It's still full of typos 
and 
various grammar mistakes...

Thanks,

        Ingo

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