> Alan Ott wrote:

> On 11/22/2012 04:00 AM, Markus Becker wrote:
> > Hi,
> > 
> > just some small typo fixes in the documentation, that I stumbled over
> > while reading.
> > 
> > --
> > Markus
> > 

[...]

> > 
> > -expected in applications such as wireless Sensor Networks.  [RFC4944]
> > defines +expected in applications such as Wireless Sensor Networks. 
> > [RFC4944] defines
> 
> "Wireless Sensor Networks" shouldn't be capitalized.

OK, fully decapitalized it, it was mixed capitalisation: wireless Sensor 
Network.

[..]

> 
> Send this to the netdev mailing list. Also, use
> scripts/get_maintainer.pl to get a list of the people and mailing lists
> it should go to.

scripts/get_maintainer.pl does not report netdev, but Dave individually:

Rob Landley <r...@landley.net> (maintainer:DOCUMENTATION)
"David S. Miller" <da...@davemloft.net> (commit_signer:1/2=50%)
Alexander Smirnov <alex.bluesman.smir...@gmail.com> (commit_signer:1/2=50%)
linux-...@vger.kernel.org (open list:DOCUMENTATION)
linux-ker...@vger.kernel.org (open list)

But shouldn't MAINTAINERS also have Documentation/networking/ieee802154.txt 
listed in the IEEE 802.15.4 SUBSYSTEM, thus directing this patch to this list?

IEEE 802.15.4 SUBSYSTEM
M:      Alexander Smirnov <alex.bluesman.smir...@gmail.com>
M:      Dmitry Eremin-Solenikov <dbarysh...@gmail.com>
L:      linux-zigbee-devel@lists.sourceforge.net (moderated for non-subscribers)
W:      http://apps.sourceforge.net/trac/linux-zigbee
T:      git git://git.kernel.org/pub/scm/linux/kernel/git/lowpan/lowpan.git
S:      Maintained
F:      net/ieee802154/
F:      net/mac802154/
F:      drivers/net/ieee802154/
+F:      Documentation/networking/ieee802154.txt

Nevertheless, attached is the modified patch, if it should go through this 
list. If not, I could send it to the addresses reported by the the script.




Signed-off-by: Markus Becker <m...@comnets.uni-bremen.de>
---
 Documentation/networking/ieee802154.txt |   28 ++++++++++++++--------------
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/networking/ieee802154.txt 
b/Documentation/networking/ieee802154.txt
index 703cf43..52bd50d 100644
--- a/Documentation/networking/ieee802154.txt
+++ b/Documentation/networking/ieee802154.txt
@@ -4,13 +4,13 @@
 
 Introduction
 ============
-The IEEE 802.15.4 working group focuses on standartization of bottom
-two layers: Medium Accsess Control (MAC) and Physical (PHY). And there
-are mainly two options available for upper layers:
+The IEEE 802.15.4 working group focuses on standardization of the Medium
+Access Control (MAC) and Physical (PHY) (sub-)layers. And there
+are mainly two options available for the upper layers:
  - ZigBee - proprietary protocol from ZigBee Alliance
  - 6LowPAN - IPv6 networking over low rate personal area networks
 
-The Linux-ZigBee project goal is to provide complete implementation
+The Linux-ZigBee project goal is to provide a complete implementation
 of IEEE 802.15.4 and 6LoWPAN protocols. IEEE 802.15.4 is a stack
 of protocols for organizing Low-Rate Wireless Personal Area Networks.
 
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ Like with WiFi, there are several types of devices 
implementing IEEE 802.15.4.
    possibly with some kinds of acceleration like automatic CRC computation and
    comparation, automagic ACK handling, address matching, etc.
 
-Those types of devices require different approach to be hooked into Linux 
kernel.
+Those types of devices require different approaches to be hooked into Linux 
kernel.
 
 
 MLME - MAC Level Management
@@ -80,8 +80,8 @@ We provide an example of simple HardMAC driver at 
drivers/ieee802154/fakehard.c
 SoftMAC
 =======
 
-The MAC is the middle layer in the IEEE 802.15.4 Linux stack. This moment it
-provides interface for drivers registration and management of slave interfaces.
+The MAC is the middle layer in the IEEE 802.15.4 Linux stack. At the moment it
+provides interface for driver registration and management of slave interfaces.
 
 NOTE: Currently the only monitor device type is supported - it's IEEE 802.15.4
 stack interface for network sniffers (e.g. WireShark).
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ See header include/net/mac802154.h and several drivers in 
drivers/ieee802154/.
 Device drivers API
 ==================
 
-The include/net/mac802154.h defines following functions:
+The include/net/mac802154.h defines the following functions:
  - struct ieee802154_dev *ieee802154_alloc_device
    (size_t priv_size, struct ieee802154_ops *ops):
    allocation of IEEE 802.15.4 compatible device
@@ -115,8 +115,8 @@ Fake drivers
 
 In addition there are two drivers available which simulate real devices with
 HardMAC (fakehard) and SoftMAC (fakelb - IEEE 802.15.4 loopback driver)
-interfaces. This option provides possibility to test and debug stack without
-usage of real hardware.
+interfaces. This option provides a possibility to test and debug the stack
+without usage of real hardware.
 
 See sources in drivers/ieee802154 folder for more details.
 
@@ -129,22 +129,22 @@ octets of actual MAC payload once security is turned on, 
on a wireless link
 with a link throughput of 250 kbps or less.  The 6LoWPAN adaptation format
 [RFC4944] was specified to carry IPv6 datagrams over such constrained links,
 taking into account limited bandwidth, memory, or energy resources that are
-expected in applications such as wireless Sensor Networks.  [RFC4944] defines
+expected in applications such as wireless sensor networks.  [RFC4944] defines
 a Mesh Addressing header to support sub-IP forwarding, a Fragmentation header
 to support the IPv6 minimum MTU requirement [RFC2460], and stateless header
 compression for IPv6 datagrams (LOWPAN_HC1 and LOWPAN_HC2) to reduce the
 relatively large IPv6 and UDP headers down to (in the best case) several bytes.
 
-In Semptember 2011 the standard update was published - [RFC6282].
+In September 2011 the standard update was published - [RFC6282].
 It deprecates HC1 and HC2 compression and defines IPHC encoding format which is
 used in this Linux implementation.
 
 All the code related to 6lowpan you may find in files: net/ieee802154/6lowpan.*
 
-To setup 6lowpan interface you need (busybox release > 1.17.0):
+To setup a 6lowpan interface you need (busybox release > 1.17.0):
 1. Add IEEE802.15.4 interface and initialize PANid;
 2. Add 6lowpan interface by command like:
    # ip link add link wpan0 name lowpan0 type lowpan
-3. Set MAC (if needs):
+3. Set MAC (if needed):
    # ip link set lowpan0 address de:ad:be:ef:ca:fe:ba:be
 4. Bring up 'lowpan0' interface
-- 
1.7.10.4


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