Hello everybody,

I hope, I will not bring more confusion with my
suggestion.

AS several people noticed, the sentence can be taken
at a second degree, with different meaning.

Or like mentioned Bill, I think, it remember something
nobody want to remember.

Should we think a little bit more about a nice short
sentence ?

Each word/line should have a clear meaning.

I tried to replace some words like "army" by "team" or
"group".

I was thinking something like "one day for your life".
I mean, you come one day a team of geek will transform
you for the rest of your life.

An example sentence, would be something like :

one day in your life
Open your mind to Creation.
Linux is for you.

We could add the word geek too.

one day in your life
Open your mind to Creation.
Linux is for you.
By a team of great geeks !

It needs to stay short.
Ok, it need to be corrected by a native person.


        Eugene

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