On Fri, 25 Jul 2003, Sameer D. Sahasrabuddhe wrote:

> CEP office sent out the brochure for the workshop today for printing.
> Managed to get the names of the speakers into the final version. The
> pdf file is available on my website:
>
> http://www.it.iitb.ac.in/~sameerds/cep-gnulinux.pdf

Some problems with the pdf:
1. doesn't open correctly in ghostview
2. Xerox is not a verb.

Other minor grammatical cribs:
- cybercafe - one word, no acute on the e
- etc. requires a full stop after it
- Overview is one word, not Over view
- IMO, it should be `System administration' and not `Systems
Administration'

- Language consistency.
Entire document is in British English, except for the word `center'
which is American.

Well, I wish I could have mentioned these things earlier, but have been
busy with exams.  Too late now I guess.

Philip

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