Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-lisp-eid-block-12: No Record
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lisp-eid-block/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Substantive: - section 6: Predictions that the IETF will or will not do something are risky propositions at best. I suggest stating a default result that will occur _unless_ the IETF chooses to take action. Editorial: There's quite a number of grammar and word choice errors. I list some below, but I am sure I did not catch everything. I suggest another pass at proofreading before publication. -3: s/"avoid penalize"/"avoid penalizing" s/"ask an allocation"/"ask for an allocation" ; or "request an allocation" s/"avoid non-LISP domains to fragment " / "allow non-LISP domains to avoid fragmenting" "... which would negatively impact the BGP routing infrastructure" Which would cause negative impact, the fragmentation, or the avoidance of the fragmentation? s/"worth to mention"/"worth mentioning" -4 s/"Such prefix"/"Such prefixes" ; or "This prefix" /"As the LISP adoption progress"/"As the LISP adoption progresses" "... the EID block will potentially help in reducing the impact on the BGP routing infrastructure with respect to the case of the same number of adopters using global unicast space allocated by RIRs " Convoluted sentence. Can it be simplified? s/"Such trend"/"Such trends" ; or "This trend" "With the exception of PITR case (described above)" Which case is the PITR case? This is the first use of PITR. -5: s/"looks as sufficiently large"/"appears sufficiently large" -9: s/"provided by IANA before published"/"provided by IANA before publication" _______________________________________________ lisp mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lisp
