Kathleen Moriarty has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-lisp-crypto-09: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lisp-crypto/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks for your work on this draft. I think the draft would read better if the content of the Abstract is repeated in the introduction. If you read just the introduction, it is not clear what this draft is about, the abstract text is needed to have an understanding. In the introduction, I'm not sure what this means: Packets that arrive at the ITR or PITR are typically not modified, which means no protection or privacy of the data is added. Do you mean modified as in 'not encrypted' or something else? It would be easier to read if what you meant was clearly stated. It's followed by this sentence: If the source host encrypts the data stream then the encapsulated packets can be encrypted but would be redundant. But the introduction doesn't clearly say what this would be redundant to. Can you clarify this text too? Thanks for addressing the SecDir review. https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg06835.html _______________________________________________ lisp mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lisp
