Let me put it even simpler for you Luigi. Say someone wants to write a client 
program that uses the LISP control-plane documented in 6833bis. A perfect 
example of this is a lig client (RFC 6835). 

If SMRs and RLOC-Probing were to be documented in 6833bis, the lig client 
implementor would be wondering if it needs to implement SMRs and RLOC-probes. A 
lig client simply looks up an EID and prints out the RLOC-records.

Conclusion, SMRs and RLOC-probes are used by xTRs to be able to run the 
data-plane. xTRs are data-plane components. Therefore SMRs and RLOC-probes 
should stay in 6830bis, the data-plane specification.

Dino

> On Jan 12, 2018, at 3:01 AM, Luigi Iannone <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> 
> 
>> On 11 Jan 2018, at 18:50, Dino Farinacci <[email protected]> wrote:
>> 
>> Thanks Alberto for your comments. Here is how I break up items in the 
>> control-plane and the data-plane. 
>> 
>> Control-Plane (6833bis document):
>> 
>> (1) The definition of control-plane messages. These are already documented 
>> in 6833bis.
>> (2) What components make up the control-plane that are not also in the 
>> data-plane. That is Map-Servers, Map-Resovers, LISP-ALT nodes, LISP-DDT 
>> nodes. These are already documented in 6833bis.
>> 
>> Data-Plane (6830bis document):
>> 
>> (1) What is required to move packets. Which includes the encapsulation 
>> format and the database-mappings and map-cache xTRs use. These are already 
>> documented in RFC6830bis.
>> (2) The components that make up the data-plane. That is ITRs, ETRs, PxTRs, 
>> and RTRs.
>> (3) And the elements of operation that the components in (2) use. So 
>> RLOC-probing and SMRs are explained in RFC6830bis because the components in 
>> (2) use. They are using control-plane messages obviously but those messages 
>> are defined in 6833bis.
>> 
>> Note that ETRs send SMRs, note ITRs and PITR send RLOC-probes. These 
>> messages are not sent by any control-plane components. Another data-plane 
>> can be defined to do its own OAM or map version updating and use the 
>> messages defined in 6833bis to do that. But they could also might “let me 
>> try to use the same map-cache mechanisms as LISP but use a different 
>> encapsulation format”. In this case, an implementor or deployer would read 
>> 6830bis.
>> 
>> Having said that, people don’t create walls between getting information so 
>> if they want to do their own data-plane they can still read 6830bis.
>> 
>> Another point about SMRs, the entire section talks about what ITRs and ETRs 
>> do. And these devices are data-plane components. Putting this section in 
>> 6833bis would possibly surprise a reader implementing another data-plane. 
>> For instance, a VXLAN data-plane reader would say “what is an ITR and ETR? I 
>> have VTEPs”.
> 
> This reasoning does not hold.
> 
> [dhcp164-133] ~/Desktop # grep -c ITR draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-07.txt 
> 65
> [dhcp164-133] ~/Desktop # grep -c ETR draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-07.txt
> 83
> [dhcp164-133] ~/Desktop # grep -c xTR draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-07.txt
> 20
> [dhcp164-133] ~/Desktop # 
> 
> 
> 
> 
> Whoever reads 6833bis has to know what an ITR and an ETR is and what it does.
> 
> L.
> 
> 
>> Another point about SMRs, they can be data driven. This happens when an ITR 
>> encapsulates to an ETR where the EID is no longer residing. That ETR, could 
>> respond with a SMR to the ITR to inform it that it has out of date mappings. 
>> This is all data-plane driven. Wouldn’t make logical sense to put it in 
>> 6833bis.
>> 
>> Anyways, that is the way I look at it,
>> Dino
>> 
>>> On Jan 11, 2018, at 6:21 AM, Alberto Rodriguez-Natal 
>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Adding my two cents to this discussion, in the hope that it helps with
>>> the convergence.
>>> 
>>> My original hope with the reorganization of the RFCs was to be able to
>>> use the LISP control-plane with a non-LISP data-plane. Putting aside
>>> the discussion of what goes where, and with some pragmatism in mind, I
>>> think we're close to that with the current 6833bis. The major
>>> roadblock for me is the lack of SMR in that document, and I think this
>>> aligns with the view of others in the list.
>>> 
>>> I believe that with the addition of SMR, 6833bis will have all the
>>> required pieces to put together a viable LISP deployment (using a
>>> non-LISP data-plane) without having to look into 6830bis. Sure, there
>>> would be some mechanisms (e.g. RLOC probing) that would not be
>>> available using only 6833bis, but I could live without those. In
>>> addition, we could work on adding some extra explanation to the
>>> introduction of 6833bis so a non-familiar reader could make use of
>>> LISP without looking into 6830bis.
>>> 
>>> I think these two things (i.e. move SMR and extend 6833bis intro)
>>> would minimize the changes required on the current documents and would
>>> allow us to reach some rough consensus to make progress with the docs.
>>> What do you guys think?
>>> 
>>> Alberto
>>> 
>>> On Wed, Jan 10, 2018 at 6:26 PM, Dino Farinacci <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>> From my perspective on the situation:
>>>> 
>>>> (1) I made changes exactly to text that was requested.
>>>> (2) I sometimes modify what the text that was requested.
>>>> (3) I disgree with some text so don’t include it.
>>>> (4) I have made many sub-revisions of -08.
>>>> (5) Comments are coming in throughout the review period and I don’t know 
>>>> what revision you have read and what you have not read. I don’t know if 
>>>> your comments are old or based on one of the revisions. Because I see 
>>>> comments that I addressed but its not clear to me you know that (or at 
>>>> least you have not told me).
>>>> (6) The changes in (1) and (2) have not been confirmed or denied by 
>>>> commenters. So I don’t know if what I changed has been accepted.
>>>> (7) Adding text to something that has changed won’t go in properly. So 
>>>> referencing some offered text in a previous email can’t be just inserted.
>>>> 
>>>> So -08 has been submitted. I don’t know what are the outstanding issues at 
>>>> this point. So I need commenters to be specific. This is what I suggest:
>>>> 
>>>> (1) List the open issues by commenting on the latest submitted -08.
>>>> (2) Include text from the -08 draft and your comments follow with 
>>>> suggested text.
>>>> 
>>>> Let’s use that as a base to comment and discuss further. I can’t read your 
>>>> minds so I need more of your help. So please put more effort into it.
>>>> 
>>>> Thanks in advance for your support,
>>>> Dino
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>>> On Jan 10, 2018, at 2:03 AM, Luigi Iannone <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Dino,
>>>>> 
>>>>>> On 9 Jan 2018, at 18:54, Dino Farinacci <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Guys, please look at the latest changes instead of hashing the same 
>>>>>> arguments.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> This is what I am going to do. I am going to submit the myriad of 
>>>>>> changes already agreed to and then we can open up comments again for 
>>>>>> -08. I have been holding these diffs for a few weeks now and have 
>>>>>> received little commentary on the latest changes. So if your points have 
>>>>>> not been addressed, state them again AFTER reading the changes to -08.
>>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> I find this request unfair.
>>>>> I spent quite a bit of time reviewing and discussing this document, now 
>>>>> you just try to wash all out by requesting comments on -08.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Please let's continue discussing on the open issues so to find a solution.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks
>>>>> 
>>>>> Luigi
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>>> The diff of the changes are included yet again.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Dino
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> <rfcdiff-rfc6830bis.html>
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Jan 9, 2018, at 7:04 AM, Luigi Iannone <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> HI Albert,
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> thanks for your reply.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> My comments inline. (trimming what is OK for me)
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Luigi
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On 27 Dec 2017, at 02:48, Albert Cabellos <[email protected]> 
>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> [snip]
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Endpoint ID (EID):   An EID is a 32-bit (for IPv4) or 128-bit (for
>>>>>>>>> IPv6) value used in the source and destination address fields of
>>>>>>>>> the first (most inner) LISP header of a packet.  The host obtains
>>>>>>>>> a destination EID the same way it obtains a destination address
>>>>>>>>> today, for example, through a Domain Name System (DNS) [RFC1034]
>>>>>>>>> lookup or Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) [RFC3261] exchange.
>>>>>>>>> The source EID is obtained via existing mechanisms used to set a
>>>>>>>>> host's "local" IP address.  An EID used on the public Internet
>>>>>>>>> must have the same properties as any other IP address used in that
>>>>>>>>> manner; this means, among other things, that it must be globally
>>>>>>>>> unique.  An EID is allocated to a host from an EID-Prefix block
>>>>>>>>> associated with the site where the host is located.  An EID can be
>>>>>>>>> used by a host to refer to other hosts.  Note that EID blocks MAY
>>>>>>>>> be assigned in a hierarchical manner, independent of the network
>>>>>>>>> topology, to facilitate scaling of the mapping database.  In
>>>>>>>>> addition, an EID block assigned to a site may have site-local
>>>>>>>>> structure (subnetting) for routing within the site; this structure
>>>>>>>>> is not visible to the global routing system.  In theory, the bit
>>>>>>>>> string that represents an EID for one device can represent an RLOC
>>>>>>>>> for a different device.  As the architecture is realized, if a
>>>>>>>>> given bit string is both an RLOC and an EID, it must refer to the
>>>>>>>>> same entity in both cases.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Is the above sentence really necessary?
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Agreed, why not simplify the definitions. They are written from the 
>>>>>>>> ‘Internet scalability mindset’, why not say that an EID is an address 
>>>>>>>> of the overlay and an RLOC an address of the overlay. This change may 
>>>>>>>> require further changes on the document so I am not 100% sure if this 
>>>>>>>> is a good idea.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> For clarification I was just referring to the sentence:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> " As the architecture is realized, if a given bit string is both an 
>>>>>>> RLOC and an EID, it must refer to the same entity in both cases.”
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> I am wondering if such constrain is really necessary. If namespaces are 
>>>>>>> well scoped there is no need for this.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> [snip]
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> About the following:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> o  EIDs are typically IP addresses assigned to hosts.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> o  Other types of EID are supported by LISP, see [RFC8060] for
>>>>>>>>> further information.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> I would put the last two bullets in the definition of EID. It 
>>>>>>>>> simplifies the story here.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> I suggest to leave them here, I don´t think that readers start from 
>>>>>>>> the ‘Definition of terms’, these are relevant concepts to understand 
>>>>>>>> LISP.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Good point about de definition of terms. What really bothers me is the 
>>>>>>> bullet organisation. What can be done is to merge these two bullets 
>>>>>>> with the previous one.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> The description of the encap/decap operation lacks of clarity 
>>>>>>>>> concerning how to deal with
>>>>>>>>> ECN bits and DSCP .
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 1. I think that the text should make explicitly the difference 
>>>>>>>>> between DSCP and ECN fields.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 2. How to deal with ECN should be part of the description of the  
>>>>>>>>> encap/decap not a paragraph apart.
>>>>>>>>> This basically means that half of the last paragraph should be a 
>>>>>>>>> bullet of the ITR/PITR encapsulation
>>>>>>>>> and the other half  in the ETR/PETR operation.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Agreed, what about this (please comment):
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> When doing ITR/PITR encapsulation:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> o  The outer-header 'Time to Live' field (or 'Hop Limit' field, in the 
>>>>>>>> case of IPv6) SHOULD be copied from the inner-header 'Time to Live' 
>>>>>>>> field.
>>>>>>>> o  The outer-header 'Differentiated Services Code Point' (DSCP) field 
>>>>>>>> (or the 'Traffic Class' field, in the case of IPv6) SHOULD be copied 
>>>>>>>> from the inner-header DSCP field ('Traffic Class' field, in the case 
>>>>>>>> of IPv6) considering the exception listed below.
>>>>>>>> o  The 'Explicit Congestion Notification' (ECN) field (bits 6 and 7 of 
>>>>>>>> the IPv6 'Traffic Class' field) requires special treatment in order to 
>>>>>>>> avoid discarding indications of congestion [RFC3168]. ITR 
>>>>>>>> encapsulation MUST copy the 2-bit 'ECN' field from the inner header to 
>>>>>>>> the outer header. Re-encapsulation MUST copy the 2-bit 'ECN' field 
>>>>>>>> from the stripped outer header to the new outer header.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> When doing ETR/PETR decapsulation:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> o  The inner-header 'Time to Live' field (or 'Hop Limit' field, in the 
>>>>>>>> case of IPv6) SHOULD be copied from the outer-header 'Time to Live' 
>>>>>>>> field, when the Time to Live value of the outer header is less than 
>>>>>>>> the Time to Live value of the inner header.  Failing to perform this 
>>>>>>>> check can cause the Time to Live of the inner header to increment 
>>>>>>>> across encapsulation/decapsulation cycles.  This check is also 
>>>>>>>> performed when doing initial encapsulation, when a packet comes to an 
>>>>>>>> ITR or PITR destined for a LISP site.
>>>>>>>> o  The inner-header 'Differentiated Services Code Point' (DSCP) field 
>>>>>>>> (or the 'Traffic Class' field, in the case of IPv6) SHOULD be copied 
>>>>>>>> from the outer-header DSCP field ('Traffic Class' field, in the case 
>>>>>>>> of IPv6) considering the exception listed below.
>>>>>>>> o  The 'Explicit Congestion Notification' (ECN) field (bits 6 and 7 of 
>>>>>>>> the IPv6 'Traffic Class' field) requires special treatment in order to 
>>>>>>>> avoid discarding indications of congestion [RFC3168]. If the 'ECN' 
>>>>>>>> field contains a congestion indication codepoint (the value is '11', 
>>>>>>>> the Congestion Experienced (CE) codepoint), then ETR decapsulation 
>>>>>>>> MUST copy the 2-bit 'ECN' field from the stripped outer header to the 
>>>>>>>> surviving inner header that is used to forward the packet beyond the 
>>>>>>>> ETR.  These requirements preserve CE indications when a packet that 
>>>>>>>> uses ECN traverses a LISP tunnel and becomes marked with a CE 
>>>>>>>> indication due to congestion between the tunnel endpoints.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Note that if an ETR/PETR is also an ITR/PITR and chooses to 
>>>>>>>> re-encapsulate after decapsulating, the net effect of this is that the 
>>>>>>>> new outer header will carry the same Time to Live as the old outer 
>>>>>>>> header minus 1.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Copying the Time to Live (TTL) serves two purposes: first, it 
>>>>>>>> preserves the distance the host intended the packet to travel; second, 
>>>>>>>> and more importantly, it provides for suppression of looping packets 
>>>>>>>> in the event there is a loop of concatenated tunnels due to 
>>>>>>>> misconfiguration.  See Section 18.3 for TTL exception handling for 
>>>>>>>> traceroute packets.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Text looks very good to me.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Large part of this section is about control plane issues and as such 
>>>>>>>>> should be put in 6833bis.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> What this section should state is that priority and weight are used 
>>>>>>>>> to select the RLOC to use.
>>>>>>>>> Only exception is gleaning where we have one single RLOC and we do 
>>>>>>>>> not know neither priority nor weight.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> All the other operational discussion goes elsewhere, but not in this 
>>>>>>>>> document.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Agree, I suggest moving it to 6833bis. What to leave in 6830bis is 
>>>>>>>> less obvious, maybe something like (not final, just a couple of ideas):
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> The data-plane must follow the state stored in the map-cache to 
>>>>>>>> encapsulate and decapsulate packets. The map-cache is populated using 
>>>>>>>> a control-plane, such as [6833bis]. ETRs encapsulate packets following 
>>>>>>>> the Priorities and Weights stored in the map-cache.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Yes, this is what I meant.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Actually we should merge this section with 'Routing Locator Hashing'
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> I think is a good idea.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> [snip]
>>>>>>>>> 13.  Changing the Contents of EID-to-RLOC Mappings
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> This is a control plane issue, as such it has to go in 6833bis, with 
>>>>>>>>> two exception:
>>>>>>>>> The very first paragraph stetting the problem, and the versioning 
>>>>>>>>> subsection, because it is a data-plane mechanism.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> All of the rest 6833bis
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Actually I remember a suggestion about putting operations issues like 
>>>>>>>>> this in an OAM document which would be a good idea.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> So you are suggesting that the LISP control-plane does not define any 
>>>>>>>> mechanism to update EID-to-RLOC mappings?
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Not exactly. Control-plane should discuss how to change the mappings, 
>>>>>>> but things like clock sweep is just management not a control plane 
>>>>>>> mechanism, as such it does not really needs to be standardised because 
>>>>>>> there are no interoperability issues, hence it make really sense  to 
>>>>>>> put it elsewhere.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thanks
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Luigi
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
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