Hi Alvaro,

thanks for the reply. I think everything is clear. I need just one 
clarification:

> On 11 Sep 2018, at 16:05, Alvaro Retana <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> On September 11, 2018 at 5:15:38 AM, Luigi Iannone ([email protected] 
> <mailto:[email protected]>) wrote:
>>> 
>>> There are several issues in §5.1 (LISP Control Packet Type Allocations) that
>>> need to be fixed.  I don't think any of them raise up to a DISCUSS, but I 
>>> would
>>> like to see them resolved before publication.
>>> 
>>> §5.1 "defines the LISP control message formats and summarizes for IANA the 
>>> LISP
>>> Type codes assigned by this document".
>>> 
>>> (1) Instructions (or anything directed) to IANA should be in the IANA
>>> Considerations section.  There isn't even a pointer to this section later on
>>> for IANA to look at it.
>> 
>> This can be easily fixed changing the first sentence to:
>> 
>>  This section defines the LISP control message formats and summarizes
>>            for IANA the LISP Type codes assigned by this document (see 
>> details IANA considerations in Section 11).
>> 
>> What do you think?
> 
> The main point is that is you want IANA to look at this text, then the best 
> way is to put it in the IANA Considerations section.  They may be ok with a 
> pointer the other way around: from Section 11 to this section (otherwise they 
> might not notice).
> 
>> 
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> (2) The text seems to imply ("Message type definitions are") that the types 
>>> are
>>> defined here (or at least in rfc6833, which this document Obsoletes), but 
>>> they
>>> are defined in rfc6830, rfc8111 and rfc8113.  Please properly identify the
>>> source (only the rfc8113 line has a reference).
>>> 
>> 
>> Would it be sufficient to add a sentence listing the messages that this 
>> documents re-defines and the original RFC which is obsoleted?
> 
> I just want the text to be clear about what is defined here and what isn’t.  
> I think that references (like the one in there for rfc8113) would be enough.
> 
>> 

I think I’ve got now you point. What we should do is not modify section 5.1, is 
modifying section 11.2.
We should update the text and following table:
        Name                 Number          Defined in
        ----                 ------          -----------
        LISP Map-Notify-Ack  5               RFC6833bis


We should add there all the code points of messages that are re-defined in this 
document and ask IANA to update the registry so that the entries point to this 
document (and not anymore 6830).

Did I got it right?

Ciao

L.


  




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