Fabio, Perfect, thank you for fixing the abstract
-éric -----Original Message----- From: "Fabio Maino (fmaino)" <[email protected]> Date: Thursday, 9 July 2020 at 02:09 To: Eric Vyncke <[email protected]>, The IESG <[email protected]> Cc: "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]> Subject: Re: [lisp] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-lisp-gpe-16: (with COMMENT) Hi Eric, Now I see what you mean wrt the abstract/title discrepancy. In the next rev we will change the abstract text into: This document describes extensions to the Locator/ID Separation Protocol (LISP) Data-Plane, via changes to the LISP header, that support multi-protocol encapsulation *and allow to introduce new protocol capabilities.* Thanks, Fabio On 7/8/20, 2:20 AM, "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <[email protected]> wrote: Hello Fabio Thank you for the prompt and detailed reply of yours. About the discrepancy between the doc title and abstract, I still strongly suggest to update the abstract that is too restrictive (limited to multi-protocol extension) as GPE via shim headers allows for other kind of extensions. All my COMMENTs were and are still non-blocking, but, I still regret that this document is not part of the 6830bis and the use of 8-bit forcing a specific registry. (no need to reply) Finally, the cosmetic issue of having 0x04 for IPv4 and 0x06 for IPv6 won't break my heart too much but this would have been cool though (code points do not need to be incremental). Regards -éric -----Original Message----- From: "Fabio Maino (fmaino)" <[email protected]> Date: Wednesday, 8 July 2020 at 01:42 To: Eric Vyncke <[email protected]>, The IESG <[email protected]> Cc: "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]> Subject: Re: [lisp] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-lisp-gpe-16: (with COMMENT) Thanks for your review Eric. Please see below our replies. On 7/7/20, 1:02 AM, "lisp on behalf of Éric Vyncke via Datatracker" <[email protected] on behalf of [email protected]> wrote: Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-lisp-gpe-16: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lisp-gpe/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you for the work put into this document. This is really useful work and the document is easy to read. Please find below a couple of non-blocking COMMENTs (and I would appreciate a reply to each of my COMMENTs). I hope that this helps to improve the document, Regards, -éric == COMMENTS == As this document is in the same 'batch'/timing as the RFC 6830 bis, is there a reason why this extension is not in the bis document itself? [FM] there were quite a few changes and discussions introduced in 6830bis. The WG thought that keeping lisp-gpe as a separate document would simplify the review process. -- Section 3 -- What is the reason why not reusing an existing 'next protocol' registry? Or using a 16-bit Ethernet type like field (as in GRE) ? [FM] the LISP header uses the last 3 octets in the first 32-bit word for the nonce/versioning features. We designed a reduced NP field to try to squeeze a limited version of those features using octets 2-3 of lisp-gpe. It turned out that the limitations imposed by the shorter field where too much, and eventually the WG decided to eliminate the nonce/versioning features altogether from lisp-gpe. Reversing now back to 16-bit NP field, would impact the early lisp-gpe implementations that have been built so far. As a side cosmetic note, I would have preferred to have 0x04 for IPv4 and 0x06 for IPv6. [FM] we decided to assign them incrementally. We really didn’t have enough meaningful payloads to get up to 6... "the shim header MUST come before the further protocol" but, if there are other headers defined in LISP (I must confess my ignorance on this), should the shim header be just after the LISP header ? I.e. the first one of a potential chain (cfr IPv6 extension header chains) ? It is unclear whether a shim header 'next protocol' field can also have a value associated to yet another shim header. [FM] Good catch. We have re-phrased the text to make clear that there might be multiple shim headers, and they should be in front of the actual payload identified by NP 0x01-0x7F. This is ithe new text: " When shim headers are used with other protocols identified by next protocol values from 0x0 to 0x7D, all the shim headers MUST come first." == NITS == The document title "LISP Generic Protocol Extension" is generic while the document is mainly about "multi-protocol encapsulation". Should the title be changed? As a non-English speaker, I read the title as how to make any/generic extension to the LISP protocol and not as a LISP extension to support the transport of generic/any protocol. [FM] one can use lisp-gpe to extend the LISP encapsulation protocol to support generic payloads (IPv6, ethernet, NSH, iOAM, GBP, ...) in addition to IP. However it is also possible to use lisp-gpe to extend LISP features. For example, one could use a shim header to implement a nonce/versioning field of arbitrary size. That's the reason we think of the draft as a LISP Generic Protocol Extension. -- Section 3 -- [FM] all the suggestions below are addressed in rev-17 Strongly suggest to make it clear by adding a MUST in "and ignored on receipt", i.e., "and MUST be ignored on receipt" "0x05 to 0x7D " the final ':' is missing. Why not writing " 0x7E, 0x7F:" ? "deploy new GPE features", GPE is not expanded before this first use (even if quite obvious in this document). s/octect/octet/ Thanks, Fabio _______________________________________________ lisp mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lisp _______________________________________________ lisp mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lisp
