John Scudder has entered the following ballot position for charter-ietf-lisp-04-06: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/charter-ietf-lisp/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- “LISP deployments could benefit from more advanced internet-working” Should this be “interworking”? If not, why not? Editorial: s/identified by the working as main LISP applications/identified by the working group as main LISP applications/ (add “group”) s/The management of LISP protocol and deployments include data models, OAM/The management of LISP protocol and deployments including data models, OAM/ (“include” should be “including”) s/LISP tunnel endpoints are separated from by a NAT/LISP tunnel endpoints are separated from one another by a NAT/ (add “one another”) s/leveraging on/leveraging/ (remove “on”) _______________________________________________ lisp mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lisp
