Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-lisp-te-21: No Objection

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# Éric Vyncke, INT AD, comments for draft-ietf-lisp-te-21
CC @evyncke

Thank you for the work put into this document. I am balloting NoObjection
*because* it is an experimental document, else I would ballot DISCUSS (see
points on section 5.4 and 7).

Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points/nits (replies would be
appreciated even if only for my own education).

Special thanks to Padma Pillay-Esnault for the shepherd's detailed write-up
including the WG consensus and the justification of the intended status.

I hope that this review helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

## COMMENTS (non-blocking)

### Shepherd's write-up

I am a little puzzled to see the shepherd listed as authors as well; this is
quite unusual. I guess that the LISP chair/shepperd was added as an author late
in the process for the last mile of this document.

### Section 2

Please add a reference to LISP RFC(s).

More serious, I wonder whether the IETF needs to have yet another TE mechanism
(The ELP really looks like SRv6 or SR-MPLS SID list), but I guess that this can
be run as an experiment.

### Section 3

What is a `PETR`?

### Use of SVG graphics

To make a much nicer HTML rendering, suggest using the aasvg too to generate
SVG graphics. It is worth a try especially if the I-D uses the Kramdown file
format ;-)

### Section 4

Suggest adding the nodes X & Y already in figure 1.

### Section 5

Where are the S-bit and L-bit defined ? Probably in RFC 8060, but let's be
explicit.

### Section 5.4

Relying on the TTL only for loop avoidance is a severe limitation that would
not be acceptable in a proposed standard to be clear. A hostile participant
could then create a 255 tunnels loop if I understand correctly.

### Section 7

I am afraid that [I-D.filyurin-lisp-elp-probing] is a normative reference.

### Section 8

s/One example is to implement a *honey-pot* service/One example is to implement
a *packet scrubber* service/ ?



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