Document: draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6831bis
Title: The Locator/ID Separation Protocol (LISP) for Multicast Environments
Reviewer: Darren Dukes
Review result: Has Nits

I'm performing this review on behalf of rtgdir for IETF last call.

Document: draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6831bis-06
Result: Has Nits

The document is generally in good shape with nits and one minor issue ...

Minor:
- Mpriority and Mweight are not defined by RFC 9300
  I got very excited when I couldn't find a definition in RFC9300 until I
  realized the correct reference in 9.1.4 was RFC9301, and the mPriority use of
  255 was not against its definition in RFC9300. More of a nit but I spent time
  on it.

Nits:
- RFC 3376 and RFC 3810 are obsolete
- Replace draft-ietf-pim-jp-extensions-lisp-09 reference with RFC 9798
- are RFC 8059 and RFC 9798 in fact normative references? I couldn't tell if
RFC8059 was required in section 7.1 for other functionality... - minor
editorial changes like spelling: “succesfully,” and duplicate words “for for.”

Thanks,
  Darren


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