On 9/17/07, Duncan Sands <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> Hi,
>
> > Rewrite of andersen's to be about 100x faster, cleaner, and begin to 
> > support field sensitivity
>
> some nitpicking comments:
>
> > +// without any issues.  To wit, an indirect call Y(a,b) is equivalence to
>
> equivalence -> equivalent

Fixed

>
> >  STATISTIC(NumIters            , "Number of iterations to reach 
> > convergence");
> >  STATISTIC(NumConstraints      , "Number of constraints");
> >  STATISTIC(NumNodes            , "Number of nodes");
> > -STATISTIC(NumEscapingFunctions, "Number of internal functions that 
> > escape");
> > -STATISTIC(NumIndirectCallees  , "Number of indirect callees found");
> > +STATISTIC(NumUnified          , "Number of variables unified");
>
> there are now a lot of pointless spaces here.  How about aligning commas on 
> the
> end of NumConstraints?

Sure

>
> > +    /// Constraint - Objects of this structure are used to represent the 
> > various
> > +    /// constraints identified by the algorithm.  The constraints are 
> > 'copy',
> > +    /// for statements like "A = B", 'load' for statements like "A = *B",
> > +    /// 'store' for statements like "*A = B", and AddressOf for statements 
> > like
> > +    /// A = alloca;  The Offset is applied as *(A + K) = B for stores,
> > +    /// A = *(B + K) for loads, and A = B + K for copies.  It is
> > +    /// illegal on addressof constraints (Because it is statically
>
> Because -> because

Fixed
>
> Also, in this and other comments some lines are rather short, and I can't 
> always see why
> you break them early.

I just do whatever emacs fill-paragraph does.  I'll rerun it on the comments :)

>
> > +    struct Node {
> > +       Value *Val;
> > +      SparseBitVector<> *Edges;
>
> strange indentation of Val.
Fixed

>
> > +      // compression.  NodeRep gives the index into GraphNodes
> > +      // representative for this one.
>
> Probably "the GraphNodes representative"

Fixed
>
> > +      unsigned NodeRep;    public:
>
> shouldn't "public:" be on the next line?
>
Fixed

> > +
> > +      Node() : Val(0), Edges(0), PointsTo(0), OldPointsTo(0), 
> > Changed(false),
> > +               NodeRep(SelfRep) {
> > +      }
>
> Closing } could follow the opening { on the previous line.
Fixed

>
> > +    // Map from graph node to maximum K value that is allowed (For 
> > functions,
>
> For -> for

Fixed

>
> > +    // Stack for Tarjans
>
> Tarjan's

Fixed
 > +        // This may look a bit ugly, but what it does is allow us to process
> > +        // both store and load constraints with the same function.
>
> with the same function -> within the same function (?)


No. It really should be "with the same code"

> > +          // Need to increment the member by K since that is where we are
> > +          // supposed to copy to/from
>
> Missing full stop.
Fixed

>
> > +          // Node that in positive weight cycles, which occur in address 
> > taking
>
> Node that -> Note that

Fixed.

Thanks!

I have something that spell checks comments, but not something that
grammar checks them, so these things are always helpful :)
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