Hi!
I was surprised to discover that Wikipedia does not already have a German
article on LMMS.
After all, Germany has the second-largest download of the User Manual
(despite the fact that it is in English!).
Some comments-
1. It would be good to list the features of the program first.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/LMMS#Features
2. Remove the QT4-related sentence- It is a trivial detail.
If you must include it, then introduce a "History" section and put this
there (along with other historical trivia).
3. Conventionally, Wikipedia does not explain the GUI (various windows) of
any software program.
(If you do want to write on this subject, you will have to start a
wikibook. http://de.wikibooks.org/wiki/Hauptseite)
4. In the "Siehe auch" section, you can list other software
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/LMMS#See_also
To find more equivalent applications:
http://alternativeto.net/software/lmms---linux-multimedia-studio/
(Tip: Check out ALL the applications listed on that page- You could
discover some more applications that are not listed on the LMMS page. For
example, if you click on FL Studio" link, you will see alternative
applications for FL Studio, many of which are equivalent to LMMS, but some
of them may not NOT listed on the LMMS page.)
5. BTW if you decide to retain the UI section, then correct the following:
(Note: I used Google translation. So the comments below may not be
accurate.)
a. The heading "Ausstattung" translates to "Equipment" in English. It
should be "User interface".
b. Add "editor" After "piano roll" and "automation".
c. There is no top-level window called "Instrumentspur" (see the User
Manual for details)
d. Add "Note Editor" window
6. You can mention the User Manual (pdf file) as source/reference:
http://sourceforge.net/projects/lmms/files/UserManual/UserManual_0.4.12.1_2011-08-30.pdf/download
7. Add that the user can record his own samples and use it as melody
instrument or percussion instrument.
8. The wiki page mentions that-
"LMMS includes a large library of prebuilt synth sounds and samples in Ogg
Vorbis
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"
This draws unnecessary attention to the ogg vorbis format. Actually LMMS
can use multiple formats flexibly.
Especially when it comes to user-recorded samples, users may have a concern
whether they can use mp3s.
Therefore, please mention what filetypes LMMS can handle.
By the same token, also mention the export file types.
Hope that helps.
Regards,
Narayan
On Thu, Jan 19, 2012 at 2:01 PM, René Kopeinig <renekopei...@gmail.com>wrote:
> Hello LMMS-Community :-)
>
> My name is René Kopeinig and I want to promote this great program in the
> german area of the world with an article on Wikipedia :-D.
> Can you please read it and give me a feedback?
>
> here is the link: http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Benutzer:Deadlyhappen/LMMS
>
> If you find some mistakes in the article or there is something what misses
> in it, please let me know :-)
>
> much regards René
>
>
>
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