Acee

Thank you for the list of features in s.2.4; much appreciated.  A couple
of minor editorial tweaks perhaps to

11. admin-control> Support Administrative control of the protocol
26. bfd: Support BFD detection of OSPF neighbor reachability
        [RFC5880], xref target="RFC5881"/>

With the BFD reference, yes, I like
       reference "RFC YYYY - YANG Data Model for Bidirectional
but would still add a Note to the RFC Editor asking them to replace YYYY
with the assigned RFC number for
   [I-D.ietf-bfd-yang]
(which is how it appears in the Normative References).

And you still have a
link-state database
in
rpc clear-database
which I prefer to be
Link State Database

Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <[email protected]>
To: <[email protected]>
Sent: Tuesday, August 28, 2018 6:34 PM

> This version addresses Tom Petch's last call comments.
> Thanks,
> Acee
>
> On 8/28/18, 1:10 PM, "Lsr on behalf of [email protected]"
<[email protected] on behalf of [email protected]> wrote:
>
>
>     A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
>     This draft is a work item of the Link State Routing WG of the
IETF.
>
>             Title           : Yang Data Model for OSPF Protocol
>             Authors         : Derek Yeung
>                               Yingzhen Qu
>                               Jeffrey Zhang
>                               Ing-Wher Chen
>                               Acee Lindem
>     Filename        : draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14.txt
>     Pages           : 115
>     Date            : 2018-08-28
>
>     Abstract:
>        This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to
configure
>        and manage OSPF.  The model is based on YANG 1.1 as defined in
RFC
>        7950 and conforms to the Network Management Datastore
Architecture
>        (NDMA) as described in RFC 8342.
>
>
>     The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ospf-yang/
>
>     There are also htmlized versions available at:
>     https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14
>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14
>
>     A diff from the previous version is available at:
>     https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14
>
>
>     Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
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>
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