Hi Russ, Thanks much for the fast turnaround on the review!
Les, et al, Go ahead and publish a -21 version to address these comments. I would guess it is going to be awhile until Alvaro gets to this document as he said he was back traveling in next week - better him than me __ Thanks, Acee On 11/10/18, 10:50 AM, "[email protected]" <[email protected]> wrote: Hello, I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft. Document: draft-ietf-isis-segment-routing-extensions-20 Reviewer: Russ White Review Date: 10 November 2018 IETF LC End Date: 12 December 2018 Intended Status: Standards Track Summary: This document is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be considered prior to publication. Overall, this document is well written, and the mechanisms described are well thought out. Major Issues: No major issues found. Minor Issues: No minor issues found. Nits: Section 2.1 Algorithms identifiers are defined in Section 3.2. "Algorithm" rather than "Algorithms." Sections 2.1 and 2.2 "Length" is listed as "variable," but not further definition is provided. From the text it seems like valid values here would be 3 or 20, in octets, as this is explicit in section 2.3, but it might be good to clarify (ie, just copy the text for "Length" in section 2.3 to these sections as well). 😊 /r _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr
