Hi Lada,
Thanks for the review - all the nits will be fixed in the -24 version of the
draft.
Thanks,
Acee
On 7/23/19, 5:15 PM, "Ladislav Lhotka via Datatracker" <nore...@ietf.org>
wrote:
Reviewer: Ladislav Lhotka
Review result: Ready with Nits
I reviewed already revision 09 of this module [1]. All substantial
objections and suggestions expressed in that review are addressed in
revision 23 and I am satisfied with the result. I especially
appreciate that descriptions were considerably expanded and references
added in many places.
I tested validity of the ietf-ospf module with pyang and Yangson
tools, and found no issues. The comments below are non-substantial and
do not affect practical use of the module.
In summary, I think this YANG module and document is a remarkable
piece of work demonstrating that it is possible to build quite complex
vendor-neutral data model that can be used equally well with several
router plaforms.
Comments:
- names of locally-defined identities as parameters of XPath
functions derived-from and derived-from-or-self sometimes have
the 'ospf:' prefix, sometimes don't. I suggest to be
consistent, and the option without a prefix looks better to me.
- RFC 8407 suggests this format of references to RFC:
RFC XXXX: Title of the Document
This draft uses a hyphen instead of a colon. I suggest to
follow the 8407 convention so as to make parsing easier.
- the title of Sec. 2.8 should be "OSPF Notifications" (plural
and capitalization)
- enumerations "nssa-translator-state-type" and
"restart-status-type" define the value parameter
for two of their enums but not for the third. This should be
avoided.
[1]
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-ospf-yang-09-yangdoctors-lc-lhotka-2017-12-06/
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