Russ, thanks for your review. Les, thanks for addressing the review comments. I entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Aug 16, 2019, at 5:05 PM, Russ Housley <[email protected]> wrote: > >>> Nits: >>> >>> Section 3.2.3: The lettered paragraphs at the top of the section >>> begin with lower case letters, but the lettered paragraphs at the >>> top of the section begin with upper case letters. Please be >>> consistent. >>> >> [Les:] Done > > Cool. > >>> Section 3.2.3: s/time after which the adjacency will now expire/ >>> /time after which the adjacency will expire/ >>> >> [Les:] I left this unchanged. The text is identical to text in Section >> 3.2.1 regarding the RA bit. The point of using "now expire" is to emphasize >> that the expiration time has been adjusted as a result of the RR/PR request. >> Hope this is OK with you. > > Sure. That makes sense. > >>> Section 3.2.3 says: >>> >>> ... It >>> is therefore useful to signal a planned restart (if the forwarding >>> plane on the restarting router is maintained) so that ... >>> >>> I suggest: >>> >>> ... If >>> the forwarding plane on the restarting router is maintained, it >>> is useful to signal a planned restart so that ... >> >> [Les:] I rewrote this paragraph. The term "restart" has been defined in >> Section 2 to be associated with a control plane restart which involves >> maintenance of the forwarding plane - so some of the text was redundant. >> I hope the revised text is both more readable and more precise. > > I just fetched the -05 version. The revised paragraph looks good to me. > > Russ > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr
