Hi Ben, Thanks again for the detailed review. I've made the editorial changes below in the -42 version. Thanks, Acee
On 10/15/19, 1:38 AM, "Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker" <nore...@ietf.org> wrote: Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-41: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks for the updates in the -41! I think that "i-e" in the following got missed, but that can probably be done with an RFC Editor note, so I'm clearing my Discuss: grouping neighbor { description "IS-IS standard neighbor grouping."; leaf neighbor-id { type extended-system-id; description "IS-IS neighbor system-id"; } container instances { description "List of all adjacencies between the local system and the neighbor system-id."; list instance { key id; leaf id { type uint32; description "Unique identifier of an instance of a particular neighbor."; } leaf i-e { type boolean; description "Internal or External (I/E) Metric bit value"; } Also, I think that a spurious 'd' got added into "Routing Information Based". _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list Lsr@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr