From: Lsr <[email protected]> on behalf of Yingzhen Qu <[email protected]> Sent: 07 August 2020 22:55
Hi Chairs, On behalf of the authors, I’d like to request WG LC of “YANG Model for OSPFv3 Extended LSAs”: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang/ <tp> This is a tough read. I would like to compare the data structures with those in the RFC defining the LSA but the YANG module is devoid of such references. Adding those references would encourage me to review more. And there are a number of admin issues. Requirements lacks RFC8174 in the body of the I-D I see no upper case words in the YANG module but you include the boilerplate. Tree diagrams no reference XXXX means different I-D in different places import lack references security lacks TLS1.3 RFC8242 not in I-D References RFC8174 not in I-D References import OSPF must be Normative Tom Petch This model severs as a foundation for future OSPFv3 extensions using extended LSAs (RFC 8362) and will be augmented by those new features, such as OSPFv3 Extensions for Segment Routing. Please let us know if you need any other info. Thanks, Yingzhen _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr
