Hi Matthew,
Thanks for your RTG directorate review!!! These can be included in the WG last
call comment revisions. I had suggested the exact same change for "to be
diverted".
Hi Co-authors,
Please include the nits below.
Thanks,
Acee
On 4/27/22, 11:46 AM, "Matthew Bocci via Datatracker" <nore...@ietf.org> wrote:
Reviewer: Matthew Bocci
Review result: Ready
The draft is basically ready. I found the it easy to read and well written.
Thank you!
I have a few minor nits, intended to improve readability, as follows:
Section 2.2:
"..to a bunch of routers R1 thru RN..." I suggest changing 'thru' to
'through',
to be consistent with the rest of the draft. "...towards the core getting
diverted away..." I suggest changing this to "...towards the core to be
diverted away..."
Section 4 LLS Reverse Metric TLV
Please expand 'LLS' on first use.
Section 6 Procedures, first bullet
"..by any of its neighbor on any of its links..." I suggest changing to
"..by
any of its neighbors on any of its links..."
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