Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection-11: No Objection

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Thank you to Rich Salz for the SECDIR review.

** Section 4.1
   The Flood Reflection TLV SHOULD NOT appear more than once in an IIH.

Why isn’t the guidance here “MUST NOT” appear since any subsequent, duplicate
Flood Reflection TLVs are ignored?

Same comment on the discovery Sub-TLV in Section 4.2, and Section 4.4

** Section 4.3
      Carries encapsulation type and
      further attributes necessary for tunnel establishment as defined
      in [RFC9012].  The Protocol Type sub-TLV as defined in [RFC9012]
       MAY be included.

The first sentence suggests that the semantics of this field are defined by
RFC9012.  The second sentence suggests that it is optional to support the
Protocol Type sub-TLV per Section 3.4.1 of RFC9012.  This is confusing to me
because RFC9012 supports a number of sub-TLVs to include the Protocol Type one
explicitly called out.  Is that the only sub-TLV supported for use?

Editorial
** Section 1.  Typo. s/Maintainance/Maintenance/

** Section 1.  Editorial.  Consider using a less colloquial phrase than
“Deployment-wise”.

** Section 4.2.  Editorial.  s/one ore more/one or more/



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