[+ Sarah]

Sarah, could you please review section 6.6.2.1. I no longer have access to an 
implementation, so it’s all up to you.

AFAIK, there is no implementation of dynamic flooding for OSPF, so I don’t know 
of a way to check against an implementation.

I would be happy to add a reference for K5,8. I have two references available: 
one is a textbook, the other is wikipedia.  Preferences?

Tony



> On Jun 5, 2023, at 10:30 AM, Acee Lindem <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Hi Sue, 
> 
> Thanks for your review of a fairly large specifying complex functionality 
> required prior IGP expertise. 
> 
> Authors, 
> 
> Please address Sue’s comments. 
> 
> Thanks,
> Acee (as document Shepherd) 
> 
>> On Jun 5, 2023, at 13:21, Susan Hares via Datatracker <[email protected]> 
>> wrote:
>> 
>> Reviewer: Susan Hares
>> Review result: Ready
>> 
>> The document is written in a clear and concise manner.
>> The authors have done an excellent job of making a difficult subject clear 
>> and
>> readable.
>> 
>> Two technical sections should be checked against implementations of IS-IS 
>> with
>> dense flooding (section 6.6.2.1 and section 6.6.2.2.  I am not implementing 
>> so
>> this check is beyond my capabilities.
>> 
>> Editorial nit:
>> section 3, requirement 3, sentence 2.  "Just addressing a complete bipartite
>> topology such as K5, 8 is insufficient."  An informative reference to K5,8 
>> or a
>> bipartite topology might be helpful to readers.  This is an optional 
>> editorial
>> comment.
>> 
>> 
> 

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