From: Lsr <[email protected]> on behalf of Christian Hopps 
<[email protected]>
Sent: 19 August 2023 01:26

This begins a 2 week WG Last Call, ending Sep 1, 2023, for:

  https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang/

<tp>
Some stray thoughts from a quick look at -22

**   It is an augmentation of the OSPF base model provided support for
perhaps provides

             /ospf:ospfv3/ospf:body:
I have forgotten what that final colon does but it is not in the YANG

OLD
             |  +--ro prefix-options
             |  |  +--ro prefix-options*   identityref
NEW
             |  +--ro prefix-options
             |  |  +--ro prefix-option*   identityref
might be clearer with the singular

     identity ospfv3-e-inter-area-router-lsa {
...
       reference
         "RFC 8362: OSPFv3 Link State Advertisement (LSA)
          Extensibility, Section 4.3";
Section 4.4 I think
I have not checked to see which section the data objects relate to

       description
         "Intra-Area Prefix TLV Grouping";
       reference
         "RFC 8362: OSPFv3 Link State Advertisement (LSA)
          Extensibility, Section 3.4";
Section  3.7 I think
I have not checked to see which section the data objects relate to

         reference
           "RFC 8362: OSPFv3 Link State Advertisement (LSA)
            Extensibility, Appendix B - AreaExtendedLSASupport";
(twice)
Appendix B is Area Configuration Parameters

Tom Petch

Authors,

Please indicate to the list, your knowledge of any IPR related to this work.

Thanks,
Chris.


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