Mohamed Boucadair has entered the following ballot position for
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Hi Peter, Jakub, and Amit,

Thank you for the effort put into this specification.

I was surprised that the document does not cite "similar" work on revere metric
such as in RFC8500 and RFC9339. I'm not saying this is identical, but there are
similarities that are worth to acknowledge.

Please find below some points that I think need to be discussed.

# Stability & Lack of Operations Considerations

The activation of the attributes defined in this document may have implications
on the stability of the routine table. However, the document does not discuss
such implications, does not include guards to avoid frequent reverse link
updates, does not provide a guidance about how/when it is safe to make an
update, does not discuss relevant configuration matters.

Worse, the document does only include an example (as part of use case) about
how an operator can decide to trigger such message which relies on a
threshold-based approach:

Section 3:
   An operator
   might monitor metrics like CRC errors or other input-related faults
   at node B and apply thresholds over a defined observation period.  If
   such a threshold is exceeded, node B may locally assign specific
   Extended Administrative Groups to the link in the direction from B to
   A.

Absent robust hysteresis, it is risky to use such threshold-based approach as
this may lead to instability. FWIW, draft-ietf-nmop-terminology rightfully
warrant against issues that might be induced by threshold-based schemes:

   The use of threshold-driven
   Events and States (and the Alerts that they might give rise to) must
   be treated with caution to dampen any "flapping" (so that consistent
   States may be observed) and to avoid overwhelming management
   processes or systems.

Please consider adding a discussion to cover these matters. At minimum, a
reminder of the considerations in rfc9350#section-15 should be included. I
suggest you also look at rfc8500#section-3.5, rfc9339#section-7, and
rfc9339#section-8 to see to what extent the ops considerations discussed out
there are relevant in this specific context.

# IGP Flex-Algo Path Computation Rules Registry

Unless I’m mistaken, this registry is not specific to this specification.

What is the rationale for adding this registry here? How this registry is
intended to be used/maintained? Why “Expert Review” is picked as policy for
this registry, while all the steps were/are defined in PS documents? Are DEs
allowed to delete/modify/merge/reorder steps? What are the implications on
already specified metrics?


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COMMENT:
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# Illustration examples

Consider adding some examples to illustrate the intended use.

# Sections 4/5: Simplify as the types are already assigned.

OLD:
      Type (1 octet): An 8-bit field assigned by IANA to uniquely
      identify the ISIS FAERAG Sub-TLV.  Value 10 has been assigned by
      IANA.

NEW:
      Type (1 octet): 10


OLD:
      Type (2 octets): A 16-bit field assigned by IANA to uniquely
      identify the OSPF FAERAG Sub-TLV.  Value 10 has been assigned by
      IANA.

NEW:
      Type (2 octets): 10


# Section 11.1: Use the correct name of the IANA registry + indicate the 
registry group


OLD:
   IANA has assigned the following Sub-Sub-TLVs in the "ISIS Sub-Sub-
   TLVs for Flexible Algorithm Definition Sub-TLV" registry:

NEW:
   IANA has assigned the following Sub-Sub-TLVs in the " IS-IS Sub-Sub-TLVs
   for Flexible Algorithm Definition Sub-TLV" registry under “IS-IS TLV 
Codepoints”
   registry group:


# Section 11.2: Use the correct name of the IANA registry + indicate the 
registry group

OLD:
   IANA has assigned the following Sub-TLVs in the "OSPF TLVs for
   Flexible Algorithm Definition TLV" registry:

NEW:
   IANA has assigned the following Sub-TLVs in the " OSPF Flexible
   Algorithm Definition TLV Sub-TLVs" registry under “Open Shortest Path First 
(OSPF) Parameters”
   registry group:

# Section 11.2: nit

OLD: Description: Flexible Algorithm Include-All ReverseAdmin Group
NEW: Description: Flexible Algorithm Include-All Reverse Admin Group

Cheers,
Med



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