Hi Med,

please see inline (##PP4):

On 24/09/2025 07:20, [email protected] wrote:

Hi Peter,

I think that we are almost converging.

Please see inline.

Cheers,

Med

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Hi Med,

please see inline (##PP3):

On 23/09/2025 14:33, [email protected] wrote:

    Re-,

    Please see inline.

    Cheers,

    Med

    *De :*Peter Psenak <[email protected]>
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    COMMENT)

    Hi Med,

    please see inline (##PP2):

    On 23/09/2025 11:07, [email protected] wrote:

        Hi Peter,

        Thanks for the follow-up.

        Please see inline.

        Cheers,

        Med

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        Hi Med,

        thanks for the comments, please see inline (##PP):

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            DISCUSS:

            
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            Hi Peter, Clarence, Daniel, Shraddha, and Gyan,

            Thank you for the effort put into this specification.

            I like the approach adopted here as it leverages exiting features 
(which is

            good for backward compatibility) and thus eases incremental 
deployment.

            # Meta comment

            The flow of the document can be made better by introducing the 
explicit

            signaling part early in the document as that is what actually demux 
the use

            defined in the draft vs. any other future uses of the specific 
metric. The

            current flow reveals that the signaling part was added as an after 
though, not

            as part of the design.

        ##PP2
        the document has been re-ordered several times based on the
        comments during various stages of the review process.
        I'm a bit reluctant to change it again, as different people
        have a different  priorities, and it's not possible to make
        everyone happy.
        In the end, what we are specifying is rather simple, so the
        ordering does not play that significant role IMHO.

        */[Med] I understand, but I still think this is important to
        fix. FWIW, as part of this review, I have checked
        implementations available out there and I was puzzled by one
        UPA implementation that says “UPA flags are not supported”./*

        */The current structure reveals this issue: the
        support/advertisement/propagation are specified separately
        than signaling (which is the core of the extension and which
        justifies at the first place the PS status). The signaling
        part should be integrated in the “Supporting …” part./*

    ##PP2
    done

    */[Med] Thanks./*

        */   3. Supporting UPA in IS-IS . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
        . . . .   5/*

        */     3.1. Advertisement of UPA in IS-IS . . . . . . . . . .
        . . . .   5/*

        */     3.2. Propagation of UPA in IS-IS . . . . . . . . . . .
        . . . .   6/*

        */   4. Supporting UPA in OSPF  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
        . . . .   6/*

        */     4.1. Advertisement of UPA in OSPF  . . . . . . . . . .
        . . . .   7/*

        */     4.2. Propagation of UPA in OSPF  . . . . . . . . . . .
        . . . .   8/*

        */   5. Signaling UPA . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
        . . . .   8/*

        */     5.1. Signaling UPA in IS-IS  . . . . . . . . . . . . .
        . . . .   8/*

        */     5.2. Signaling UPA in OSPF . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
        . . . .   9/*

        */5.2.1.  Signaling UPA in OSPFv2 . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
        .   9/*

        */5.2.2.  Signaling UPA in OSPFv3 . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
        .   9 /*

            Please find below some DICUSS points:

            # Planned Maintenance

            I expect that adequate reconfiguration will be put in place to 
isolate a node

            for PM purposes. The document does not explain how the signal 
defined here is

            needed or solves an issue. I appreciate that the introduction 
include a short

            mention of the use of overload bit, though.

            I’m also asking the question because there is no ** normative ** 
discussion (at

            least I missed it) about how that can be triggered at the 
originating ABR.

            Also, unlike a random failure, a planned failure is associated with 
an expected

            start and end times. Signaling the event without those 
characteristic questions

            the value of tagging a loss as an NP.

        ##PP
        I'm not sure what is being asked. This document does not
        specify the PM procedure of any kind.
        This document specifies the UPA signaling, including the bit
        that signals that the UPA was originated on the ABR/ASBR as a
        result of the PM in its source area/domain.

        UPA helps in propagating the information about the
        connectivity loss caused by the beginning of the PM outside of
        the area/domain. That's all.

        */[Med] The main point is what issue are we solving by
        indicating a planned failure, compared to sole use of U-flag?
        What we lose if the UP-flag is removed?/*

    ##PP2
    application that uses these flags may treat them differently.
    That's all. We are not specifying the application treatment of any
    of these flags, but we offer the distinction.

    */[Med] We are making hidden assumptions here as we don’t know why
    these applications need such signal, how they intend to make use
    of the UP-signal, whether a simple additional flag is sufficient
    from them compared to what is already exposed with U-flag, etc./*

##PP3
we are not making any assumptions at all. We offer distinction if it becomes useful for any app.

*/[Med] This looks more like a bet here, Peter: assume that a single flag that says this a PM loss is sufficient for what these applications needs to do compared to reacting to the U-flag. /*

##PP4
yes, that was exactly what was requested by several folks in the WG. You may see it as a bet, but I see no harm.



*//*

    */Also, we don’t say how the UP-flag is triggered./*

##PP3:

Section 2 says:

UPA MAY be generated by an ABR or ASBR for a prefix that is
    summarized by the summary prefix originated by an ABR or ASBR in the
    following cases:
    1.  Reachability of a prefix that was reachable earlier was lost.
    2.  For any of the planned maintenance cases:
           - if the node originating the prefix is signalling the
           overload state in IS-IS, or or H-bit in OSPFv2 [RFC8870], or
           R-bit in OSPFv3 [RFC5340] .
           - the metric to reach the prefix from an ABR or ASBR crosses
           the configured threshold.
(2) is specific for planned maintenance. That's when the UP flag is set.

        # Configuration Efficiency

        Section 2

            Implementations MAY limit the UPA generation to specific prefixes,

            e.g.  host prefixes, SRv6 locators, or similar.  Such filtering is

            optional and MAY be controlled via configuration.

        I’m afraid that for the limit to be useful, it should be tweaked based 
on local

        operator policy and not on some magic that is internal to the 
implementation. I

        suggest the second MAY to be changed to SHOULD when such limit is 
supported.

        ##PP
        done

        */[Med] Thanks./*

            Idem for the following:

                Implementation MAY provide a configuration option to specify 
the UPA

                lifetime at the originating ABR or ASBR.

            I suggest we update it to:

                UPA implementations SHOULD provide a configuration option to 
specify the UPA

                ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

                lifetime at the originating ABR or ASBR.

        ##PP
        done

        */[Med] Thanks./*

            The reasoning for this change is that a failure may last long and 
that an

            operator would like to maintain that loss state longer (than 
allowed by a

            default limit) to accommodate how the specific application 
consuming the loss

            signal.

            Please note that you say that the validity depends on the use case:

            CURRENT (S.2):

                The

                time the UPA is kept in the network SHOULD also reflect the 
intended

                use-case for which the UPA was advertised.

            # Withdrawal

            Section 2 says:

                UPA advertisements SHOULD

                therefore be withdrawn after some amount of time, that would 
provides

                sufficient time for UPA to be flooded network-wide and acted 
upon by

                receiving nodes, but limits the presence of UPA in the network. 
 The

                time the UPA is kept in the network SHOULD also reflect the 
intended

                use-case for which the UPA was advertised.

                …

                ABR or ASBR MUST withdraw the previously advertised UPA when the

                reason for which the UPA was generated ceases - e.g. prefix

                reachability was restored or its metric has changed such that 
it is

                below the configured threshold value.

            The second MUST is not useful if that reason disappears before the 
timeout that

            triggers the SHOULD.

            I think a simple text reorder would fix this. For example,

            NEW:

                ABR or ASBR MUST withdraw the previously advertised UPA when the

                reason for which the UPA was generated ceases - e.g. prefix

                reachability was restored or its metric has changed such that 
it is

                below the configured threshold value.

                Even if the reasons persist, UPA advertisements SHOULD

                be withdrawn after some amount of time, that would provides

                sufficient time for UPA to be flooded network-wide and acted 
upon by

                receiving nodes, but limits the presence of UPA in the network. 
 The

                time the UPA is kept in the network SHOULD also reflect the 
intended

                use-case for which the UPA was advertised.

        ##PP
        done

        */[Med] ACK/*

            # Scalability control

            Section 2 says:

                It is also RECOMMENDED that implementations limit the number of 
UPA

                advertisements which can be originated at a given time.

            The benefits gained by summarization may be nullified if a large 
number of UPAs

            are injected. This recommendation is really great, but there is a 
need to

            expose a configuration parameter here. Pease

            NEW:

                UPA implementations SHOULD provide a configuration option to 
limit

                the number of such UPAs.

        ##PP
        done.

        */[Med] ACK/*

            # Backward compatibility Check

            CURRENT (3.2/4.2):

                Such requirement of

                reachability MUST NOT be applied for UPAs, as they are 
propagating

                unreachability.

            Does this mean that an ABR that don’t support UPA might discard it?

        ##PP
        it will not discard it, bit it will not propagate it between
        areas.

        */[Med] OK. This confirms what I had in mind: for the feature
        to be useful, all ABRs should upgraded. Can you please
        indicate this in the operational considerations section?
        Thanks. /*

    ##PP2

    Section 4.2 says (updated based on Ketan's comment):

         "OSPF ABRs, which would be responsible for propagating
           UPA advertisements into other areas need to recognize such
    advertisements.
           Failure to do so would prevent UPA to reach the routers in
    the remote areas."

    */[Med] This is a great addition. I still prefer we group these
    considerations under an OPS consideration section as this is more
    about how to operate the protocol extension./*

##PP3
I believe what we have is sufficient. As far as I know operational section is not mandatory, at least not yet. I wish it never becomes.
*/

/*

    I added similar text to section 3.2 for consistency and completeness:

    "ISIS L1/L2 routers, which would be responsible for propagating UPA
            advertisements between levels need to recognize such
    advertisements.
            Failure to do so would prevent UPA to reach the routers in
    the remote areas.

    That should be sufficient I believe.

    */[Med] Thank you./*

        # Avoid redefining exiting behaviors

        CURRENT (Section 4):

            In addition, NU-bit is defined for OSPFv3 [RFC5340].  Prefixes 
having

            the NU-bit set in their PrefixOptions field SHOULD NOT be included 
in

            the routing calculation.

        The SHOULD NOT part is already defined in 5340. What is this redefined 
again?

        ##PP

        I changed to:

        "Prefixes having  the NU-bit set in their PrefixOptions field
        are not included in the routing
         calculation."

        Is that ok? Without any text it's not clear what's the
        relevance of the NU bit here.

        */[Med] It is better. You can add a pointer to Section 4.8.1
        of [RFC5340]./*

    ##PP2:
    pointer to///RFC5340 is provided in the previous sentence:/

    "In addition, NU-bit is defined for OSPFv3 [RFC5340]. Prefixes
    having the NU-bit set in their PrefixOptions field are not
    included in the routing calculation."

    */[Med] Having an explicit pointer where to look in that RFC will
    be convenient for readers./*

    # Check on “UP-Flag” is useless

    5.1.1

        The prefix that is advertised with U-Flag or UP-Flag  MUST have the

        metric set to a value larger than 0xFE000000.  If the prefix metric

        is less than or equal 0xFE000000, both of these flags MUST be

        ignored.

    5.2.2

        The prefix that is advertised with U-Flag or UP-Flag MUST have the

        NU-bit set in the PrefixOptions of the parent TLV.

    The “or UP-Flag” part of both MUSTs is useless as U-Flag will be set in such

    case as well. The case where only UP-Flag is set is invalid and will be 
ignored.

    Unless I missed a subtle thing here, please update these two.

    ##PP
    good catch, fixed it.
    We changed the UP flag from standalone one to be suplementary, but
    we forgot to update the text.

    */[Med] Thanks./*

        # Service stability

        The document declares the applications that consume the signal out of 
scope.

        Which is fine. However, there might be some negative implications due 
to how

        the loss signal (or it withdrawal/absence) is interpreted. For example, 
add a

        warning to insist that withdrawal does not mean revert to a nominal 
state.

        Having few sentences for these service to take appropriate measure 
before

        reverting.

    ##PP

    The usage of the UPA depends on the application. As we may not
    know what applications are going to use it, I would be reluctant
    to specify the application behavior.

    */[Med] This is not about specifying the behavior but indicating
    precaution that these applications need to take care of./*

        For some applications, the presence of the UPA may be
        required, before the application itself detects the loss later.

        Section 2 says:
        "ABR or ASBR MUST withdraw the previously advertised UPA when
        the reason for which the UPA was generated ceases"

        In such case the withdrawal could mean that the prefix for
        which the UPA was generated became reachable again.

        */[Med] but we also withdraw UPA after a timer even if the
        reachability is not OK. Depending solely on the absence of UPA
        to infer that reachability is back, is not deterministic./*

        UPA is a one time signal for applications that there might be
        some loss of connectivity. Application itself must use its own
        mechanism to verify/detect the loss eventually. In the
        meantime it may decide to do some proactive measures, but UPA
        does not dictates the application behavior.

        */[Med] We just need to say so in the OPS consideration section./*

    ##PP2

    I added the following text at the end of the "Processing of the
    UPA" section:

         "Applications using the UPA cannot use the absence of the UPA
    to infer that the
           reachability of the prefix is back. They must rely on their
    own mechanisms to verify
           the reachability of the remote end-points."

    */[Med] Looks good to me. Thanks./*

    ----------------------------------------------------------------------

    COMMENT:

    ----------------------------------------------------------------------

    # Topology-dependent matters

    Abstract:

        This enables fast

        convergence by steering traffic away from the node which owns the

        prefix and is no longer reachable.

    “steering..” part of the text is only possible when there alternate routes 
for

    that prefix. Otherwise, the traffic will be dropped anyway.

    Pleas reword. For example, saying “when applicable” or similar would be just

    fine.

    ##PP
    done

    */[Med] Thanks./*

        # Why now?

        Summarization was there since decades. A mention about what exacerbates 
the

        need for this new feature now (and was not considered as a major issue 
in past)

        would be helpful.

    ##PP
    is it really required? I was not planning to mention it in the
    text . But if you insist...

    */[Med] As a reader, it is helpful to understand this. /*

    It's the SRv6 that brings summarization back in life for underlay
    (IGPs). With MPLS summarization was not possible.

    */[Med] I see that Robert/Joel have some comments on this. I trust
    that some motivation that captures the discussion will be recorded
    in the draft. Thank you./*

    /##PP*2
    */I intentionally did not want to spark that discussion and that
    was the reason there was no such text there. I would rather leave
    it that way.*/
    /**/[Med] Up to you to decide here./*

            # "Egress" depends on the traffic directionality

            Section 1:

                Similarly, when an egress router needs to be taken out of 
service for

                maintenance, the traffic is drained from the node before taking 
it

                down.

            A router may behave as ingress/egress as a function of traffic 
direction. I

            would delete “egress” here.

        ##PP
        done

        */[Med] ACK/*

            # (ni) There might be many ABRs per area, not single one

            Please make this change in Section 1 (and similar):

            OLD:

                When prefixes from such node are summarized by the

                Area Border Router (ABR) or Autonomous System Boundary Router 
(ASBR),

            NEW:

                When prefixes from such node are summarized by an

                Area Border Router (ABR) or Autonomous System Boundary Router 
(ASBR),

        ##PP
        done

        */[Med] ACK/*

            # (Operational Considerations) Many signals, distinct expected uses

            Section 1 has the following:

                This document does not define how to advertise prefix that is 
not

                reachable for routing.  That has been defined for IS-IS in 
[RFC5305]

                and [RFC5308], for OSPF in [RFC2328], and for OSPFv3 in 
[RFC5340].

            I wonder whether we can list the signals available out there 
(explicit prefer

            advertisement, prefix with a specific metric, etc.) and remind the 
intend use

            scope for each of them. This can be record in the Operational 
Considerations.

        ##PP
        that is what the beginning of section 3 and 4 are doing for
        ISIS and OSPFv2/v3 respectively.

        */[Med] Yeah, but that is lost in the mass. Moving/extending
        that part is as a helpful operational considerations to
        clarify the scope for each of these tools and this help those
        who will deploy./*

    ##PP2
    I don't feel it's lost.

    */[Med] That’s fine as an author. But, I’m approaching this from
    distinct perspective: as an operator who want to digest how this
    is different from the tools already./*

##PP3
as an operator, you are only interested in one protocol. As such you are only going to read the section that is specific to that protocol. That is my experience with operators :)

    *//*

    The document is organized in a protocol specific sections because
    historically different mechanisms were defined for each protocol.
    Section 3.1 and 4.1. discuss in detail the existing protocol
    mechanisms. I don't see a need for the operational section that
    repeats the same thing.

    */[Med] It does not to repeat things, but better structure some of
    the content you already have./*

        I’m raising this point, especially that the text right after says the 
following

        without appropriate scoping:

        CURRENT:

            This document defines two new flags in IS-IS, OSPF, and OSPFv3.

            These flags, together with the existing protocol mechanisms, provide

            the support for advertising prefix unreachability , together with 
the

            ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

            reason for which the unreachability is advertised

        ##PP
        what do you mean by "without appropriate scoping"?

        */[Med] Saying that « /*the support for advertising prefix
        unreachability”*/ may be interpreted that we are advertising
        explicit prefix reachability, while we are not. /*

    ##PP2
    I still do not follow. Protocols have been defined to advertise
    explicit prefix reachability day one. Nothing changes there. We
    are defining a way to advertise explicit prefix unreachability.

    */[Med] We are defining a reachability loss not signaling whether
    a prefix is UP/DOWN. These are distinct things in my mind./*

##PP3

we are defining unreachability signaling which is needed for something that has not been signaled as reachable previously - for the summarization use case, the reachability of the summary component was never signaled.

For what has been signalled as reachable previously, the withdrawal of such advertisement makes it unreachable.

Anyway, back to your comment, what exactly do you suggest we do?

*/[Med] At least, s//**/advertising prefix unreachability/advertising prefix unreachability loss/*

##PP4

I hope you meant */"prefix reachability loss" /*not*/"/**/prefix unreachability loss"/*

I'm sorry, but that would be incorrect. Advertising prefix reachability loss is something that exists in LS protocols today. If the prefix x/y was advertised from the originagtor Z, Z will signal the
prefix reachability loss by withdrawal of the x/y adverisement.

What we specify here is different. We are specifying a mechanism how Z can make unreachable x/y that he never advertised. And that is what we call unreachability signaling.

The fact that x/y reachability is covered by the advertisement of some other less specific prefix is not significant from the signaling perspective that we are specifying here.

        # Unreachable metric?!

        Section 1 has the following:

            This document defines a method to signal a specific reason for which

            the prefix with unreachable metric was advertised.

        Unless, I’m mistaken there is no such “unreachable metric” as a thing 
in IS-IS.

        ##PP
        Please see the section 3 of this document that
        mentions [RFC5305 <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc5305>].
        That RFC defines a metric that makes the prefix "not
        reachable" for the purpose of the routing.

        */[Med] I’m not sure to follow here. I interpret that metric
        as exclude it from SPF calculation, not more than that. /*

    ##PP2
    if you exclude it from the SPF calculation, you are making it
    unreachable, don't you?

    */[Med] No, because reachability of that prefix depends whether
    that prefix is included, e.g., another aggregate advertised with a
    “normal” metric./*

##PP3

 I'm afraid we are diverting from your original comment. The term “unreachable metric”:

RFC2328 calls the LSInfinity metric as unreachable:

LSInfinity
         The metric value indicating that the destination described by an
         LSA is unreachable.

RFC5305 <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc5305> does the same, just calls it differently.

If you have a better term how to refer to "unreachable metric" please suggest. We have been using this term for many years in LSR WG and everybody understand its meaning.

*/[Med] s//*the prefix with unreachable metric/*/the prefix with a specific metric (Section XX) (then point to the section where the extact metric are listed). /*

##PP4
this document does not define unrechable metric, that has been defined by existing RFCs for both OSPF and ISIS. OSPF calls such metric "unreachable metric", ISIS calls it "metric that MUST NOT be considered during the normal SPF computation".

Calling this a "specific metric" is simply incorrect.

I can use "metric that excludes prefix from the route calculation" or something of that nature if you really insist, even though I strongly believe that "unreachable" is far better.

thanks,
Peter

*/
/*

*//*

    *//*

    The term "unreachable metric" is a common term used in LS protocol
    community for such metric for last three decades.

        We are reusing such metric value for UPA.

            # (Operational Considerations) Activation default

            Section 2 has the following:

                UPA MAY be generated by the ABR or ASBR for a prefix that is

                summarized by the summary address originated by the ABR or ASBR 
in

                the following cases:

            Can we say something about whether the use of UPA be enabled or 
disabled by

            default?

        ##PP
        I added the following text as a response to one of the Ketan's
        comments:

        "Generation of the UPA at the ABR or ASBR is optional and
        SHOULD be controlled by
         a configuration knob."

        I would leave the default behavior for the implementations to
        decide. I see no reason why an RFC should mandate any specific
        default behavior.

        */[Med] For this specific case, UPA will be useful of enabled
        in all ABRs. I would this expect this to be disabled by default./*

    ##PP2

    why?

    */[Med] Because coordination is needed at level of a network to
    make use of a feature. Use of distinct defaults may lead to extra
    work and sub optimal behavior (e.g., some operators may introduce
    some nodes/functions with default picked by a vendor)./*

##PP3
not that I necessarily agree, but I added "It SHOULD be disabled by default." in section 2:

    Generation as well as propagation of the UPA at an ABR or ASBR is
    optional and SHOULD be controlled by a configuration knob. It SHOULD be 
disabled by default

*/[Med] /* Looks good to me. Thanks.

thanks,
Peter

    I'm going to repeat myself, but the role of the IETF is to
    maintain interoperability, not to tell implementations what
    defaults to use. It's the implementation choice and it's the
    reposnsibility of the field to push vendors to what the defaults
    should be if needed. There is no role for IETF to play there IMHO.

    # Threshold

    Section 2 says:

               - the metric to reach the prefix from the ABR or ASBR crosses

               the configured threshold.

    Can we explicit the threshold we are referring to here + add reference 
where to

    look at?

    ##PP
    there is no explicit threshold here, it's any value of the metric
    that the operator defines. For example, if for the planned
    maintenance the cost of router's links is set to some high value
    X, the operator may set the threshold on the ABR to X + something.

    */[Med] Thanks. May be s/the configured threshold/a configured
    threshold/*

    ##PP2
    done

    */[Med] ACK./*





            # Explicit references in Section 3

            OLD:

                [RFC5305] defines the encoding for advertising IPv4 prefixes 
using 4

                octets of metric information.  Section 4 specifies:

                ..

                Similarly, [RFC5308] defines the encoding for advertising IPv6

                prefixes using 4 octets of metric information. Section 2 states:

            NEW:

                [RFC5305] defines the encoding for advertising IPv4 prefixes 
using 4

                octets of metric information.  Section 4 of [RFC5305]  
specifies:

                ..

                Similarly, [RFC5308] defines the encoding for advertising IPv6

                prefixes using 4 octets of metric information.  Section 2 of 
[RFC5308]

                states:

        ##PP
        Ketan made a similar comment and the text has been updated
        already.

        */[Med] ACK./*

            # “Advertisement of UPA in IS-IS”

            CURENT (S3.1)

                Recognition of the advertisement as UPA is only required on 
routers

                which have a valid use case for this information.

            I would delete this sentence as this section is about the 
originator.

        ##PP
        done

        */[Med] Thanks./*

            # Section 6

            Consider moving that section right after current Section 7 as a 
subsection of

            an Operational Consideration section.

        ##PP
        done

        */[Med] ACK/*

            ## Multiple ABRs

            That section may also discuss whether there are specific 
consideration to take

            into account, e.g., presence of multiple ABRs with announces UPAs 
for a set of

            prefixes in an area and measures to prevent routing stability. If 
you don’t see

            any risk out there, saying that as well would be useful.

        ##PP
        there is no special risk with multiple ABRs - if the egress PE
        goes down they will all equally see it and generate the UPA.
        The problem is when one ABR sees the egress PE reachable and
        other as unreachable. This can only happen when the area
        partitions. That problem is described in section 6.

        *//*

        */[Med] I like explanation with PEs, better. The case I had in
        mind is, e.g., a multi-ABR case with anycast prefixes injected
        via distinct PEs but a failure only occurs at one PE leg.
        Probably there is no issue at all./*

            ## Consider adding any implications (or absence of) explicit 
withdrawal of an

            UPA.

        ##PP
        I'm not sure what do you mean by explicit withdrawal. UPA must
        be withdraw by the originator in all cases.

        */[Med]  I understand that by withdrawal we mean “to not
        advertise”./*

    ##PP2
    yes

    thanks,
    Peter

        Either based on the timeout, or because the reason for which
        it was generated does not exist anymore, whatever comes first.

        thanks,
        Peter

            Cheers,

            Med

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