[Lsr] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-ls-link-infinity

[Yingzhen Qu]

Hi authors,

Thanks for working on this document. I have some comments for you to
consider.

1)
Section 2.2, the description and the topology of Figure 2 don't seem to
match. It seems there are two links between node A and B, A and C, C and D,
and B and D according to figure 3 and 4. Can you please confirm?

 2)
"

3.  LSLinkInfinity-Based Solution

"
Maybe change this to "LSLinkInfinity Based Solution"?

3)
In Section 3.1, "IGP metric" is used instead of "OSPF metric".


4)

"

Prior to this specification, OSPF treated links advertised as
   LSLinkInfinity as reachable [RFC2328].

"

Maybe "Prior to this specification, OSPF treated links with an
advertised metric of LSLinkInifinity as reachable."


5)

Section 3.3

RFC6987 applies to both OSPFv2 and OSPFv3, why is
MaxReachableLinkMetric only discussed for OSPFv2?


Thanks,

Yingzhen

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