Hi Mike, Authors, I agree with Mike's comment.
> On Jan 5, 2026, at 4:03 PM, Mike Bishop via Datatracker <[email protected]> > wrote: > > Mike Bishop has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-lsr-anycast-flag-10: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to > https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-anycast-flag/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > # IESG review of draft-ietf-lsr-anycast-flag-10 > > CC @MikeBishop > > ## Comments > > ### Section 6.1, paragraph 2 > > This doesn't need 2119 keywords; just highlight the requirement for receivers. I agree. A flag is, by definition, either set or clear. > > ## Nits > > All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose > to > address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by > automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there > will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you > did with these suggestions. > > ### Typos > > #### Section 5.1, paragraph 1 > ``` > - This document requests the allocation of new value in the "OSPFv2 > + This document requests the allocation of a new value in the "OSPFv2 Agree - replace "new" with "a new". > + ++ > ``` > > ### Grammar/style > > #### Section 2, paragraph 3 > ``` > OULD be logged as an operational error (subject to rate-limiting). The AC-fla Agree - replace "error(" with "error (". > ^ > ``` > It appears that a space is missing. > > #### Section 2, paragraph 10 > ``` > eted according to OSPFv2 [RFC7684]. Thus the Flags field of the BGP-LS Prefix > ^^^^ > ``` > A comma may be missing after the conjunctive/linking adverb "Thus". Sure. Thanks, Acee > > > _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
