Author: jclarke
Date: 2010-07-28 19:51:48 +0200 (Wed, 28 Jul 2010)
New Revision: 113

Modified:
   openldap-mmr/trunk/README
Log:
Correct a few English mistakes :)

Modified: openldap-mmr/trunk/README
===================================================================
--- openldap-mmr/trunk/README   2010-07-28 15:42:59 UTC (rev 112)
+++ openldap-mmr/trunk/README   2010-07-28 17:51:48 UTC (rev 113)
@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@
 
 1. Configure MMR Tools
 
-  Edit the configuration file (openldap-mmr.conf), to feet your installation.
-  Then, take of a few needs, such as the following:
+  Edit the configuration file (openldap-mmr.conf), to fit your installation.
+  Then, take care of a few needs, such as the following:
   - Create all missing directories on the system;
   - Allow directories should be own by appropriate user/group
 
@@ -16,16 +16,16 @@
 
 2. Initialize the first provider
 
-  Then, choose a server. It will be used as the first provider. Tip the
+  Then, choose a server. It will be used as the first provider. Type the
   following command, and follow instructions:
 
     ./mmr-initprov
 
 
 
-3. Initialize other(s) provider(s)
+3. Initialize other provider(s)
 
-  On a provider (not the first one), tip the following command, and follow
+  On a provider (not the first one), type the following command, and follow
   instructions:
 
     ./mmr-addnode
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
 
 4. Adapt Openldap settings
 
-  Once one of the above command was successfully executed, adapt settings
+  Once all of the above command was successfully executed, adapt settings
   of Openldap, so that it will use the new configuration directory, instead
   of the classical configuration file.
 
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 
     /etc/init.d/slapd start
 
-  Start other(s) provider(s):
+  Start other provider(s):
 
     /etc/init.d/slapd start
 

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