Dear authors,

As individual, I do support the working group work on this direction of writing 
a terminology draft. 

Here I am sending my comments on the draft. 
1. section 2.1, 'N=1,2' should be  "N=0,1,2", to be aligned with section 3. 
2. section 2.3.2, the LowPAN AND 6LowPAN terms are not explicitly explained as 
in other sections. 
3. section 2.2.1, it seems that 'Delay tolerant networks' is a more acceptable 
word for what stems from academic 
4. section 2.*, 'constrained network' seems already covers 'constrained node 
network', does any case we need to use the _constrained node networks_ alone?
5. how about specify a term on the _constrained link_, because it emphasizes 
the link characteristic, while 'constrained nodes' emphasizes the constraint on 
the node, and 'constrained network is a composition of nodes and links, either 
of them being constrained'

Best regards,
zhen

> -----Original Message-----
> From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Cao 
> Zhen (CZ)
> Sent: Tuesday, February 05, 2013 11:27 AM
> To: [email protected]
> Subject: [Lwip] Call for adoption of the lwig-terminology draft
> 
> Dear All,
> 
> At Atlanta, we discussed the lwig terminology draft
> (http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-bormann-lwig-terms-00.txt), which is short 
> but immediate
> catch of the terminologies used in IETF works on lightweight protocols.
> 
> We have discussed with area directors about adding this to the mile stones of 
> the working group.
> 
> As its characteristics, we would like to push the document forward to make it 
> officially referable
> to the industrial.
> 
> This message starts a one-week call for adoption of this document. Please 
> feedback your opinion
> before Next Tuesday.
> 
> Thank you very much
> 
> -Zhen & Robert
> 
> 
> 
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