Dear Cao,
I support publication of this document. However I still see a few things that
could be improved prior to publication:
section 2.1 " and available power." -> should it be "and available
power/energy." ?
section 2.2.1. ; term "MSL" -> perhaps write it out in full here. Similar as
done with the DTN term in the same section.
secion 2.3.1; one sentence I found very cryptic. Perhaps to be rephrased:
It is not clear that "LLN" is much more specific than "interesting" or
"the network characteristics that RPL has been designed for".
section 4.3: could we mention here the term "sleepy device" as being
equivalent, or an alternative for, the "Always-off" class?
I've seen the term "sleepy" more often used than the term "Always-off".
The latter term may be confusing (try explaining to a colleague that you want
to communicate with an always-off device...)
regards,
Esko
-----Original Message-----
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Zhen (CZ)
Sent: Sunday, April 07, 2013 10:23
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Subject: [Lwip] WGLC for lwig-terminology
Dear All,
Discussion of lwig-terminology appears to have completed. The authors think
this document is ready for working-group last call.
This is a two-week working-group last call for draft-ietf-lwig-terminology, for
publication as an informational RFC. The working group last call ends at _April
20_
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reviewed the document, please do indicate whether you think it should go
forward.
Thanks and regards,
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