Hi Esko,

Thanks for the review. 

> One comment: instead of the current 'Summary' section I would expect a more
> concrete (i.e. less high-level) list of recommendations, perhaps related to 
> specific
> protocols that are often used in energy efficient IP networks. The current

Trying to provide such a list. 

> statements are fairly general. Point c) seems rather obvious i.e. the basic 
> principle of RF duty cycled MACs.

> Perhaps better to separate implementation advice from actual summary of the
> main findings of the document.

Good point. Will do that. 

> 
> Esko
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