Hi Folks, As an editor of this document, I go through the document again, and have the following comments.
Generally, this document is useful and interesting, and has been confirmed on several f2f meeting. Thank the contributors for the work. However, I believe there is still space for improvement. Shamed as an editor though, I will polish the text with my best. >Section.1 In many scenarios, the network systems comprise many battery-powered or energy-harvesting devices. For example, in an environmental monitoring system or a temperature and humidity monitoring system in a data center, there are no always-on and handy sustained power supplies for the potentially large number of constrained devices. In such deployment environments, it is necessary to optimize the energy consumption of the entire system, including computing, application layer behavior, and lower layer communication. Comments: This paragraph needs some improvement for clarity. >3.3. Throughput Although throughput is not typically a key concern in constrained node network applications, it is indeed important in some services in this kind of networks, such as over-the-air software updates or when off-line sensors accumulate measurements that have to be quickly transferred when there is a connectivity opportunity. Comments: this sounds not useful text. Readers are expected to know how to improve the throughput while keeping the devices energy efficient. >7 Summary. This section is very useful in understanding this document. I do not see a summary of Section. 5, which is an important technique part of this document. Best regards Zhen On Thu, Oct 15, 2015 at 6:52 PM, Zhen Cao <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Everyone, > > We discussed the draft-ietf-lwig-energy-efficient in Prague meeting > ,and the consensus was to proceed to WGLC. > > This email starts the WGLC for draft-ietf-lwig-energy-efficient. > Please express your opinion before next Friday, i.e., Oct. 23, 2015. > > Many thanks, > Zhen _______________________________________________ Lwip mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lwip
