Hi Zhen,

Thanks a lot for this draft!

A few comments/questions:

- Did you measure the native packet loss rate?

- In Table 3 (Wi-Fi), latency of CoAP-CoCoA is the same regardless of the
manually introduced packet loss rate. I would expect some C-RTT increase
with packet loss rate increase... Which is the reason why C-RTT increase
does not happen? Or is there maybe some increase below the millisecond
granularity?

- I noticed that ICMP RTT for GPRS is 572 ms, while obtained C-RTT is
often lower than that value. I guess that is due to the size of the ICMP
packets used to measure the ICMP RTT? (It would be good to indicate the
size of such packets)

- In GPRS, we also observed a slight retry ratio increase for CoAP-CoCoA
in low congestion GPRS scenarios. However, the retry ratio was
significantly lower for CoAP-CoCoA (compared to CoAP-RAW) in moderate to
high congestion conditions. It would be interesting to measure what
happens for different offered loads.

- Which window size did you use for TCP?

Minor:

- Is the CoAP client (over UDP) encapsulating the messages as CONs?

- Apparently there is a jump from section 4.2 to 4.4.

- Section 4.4:  s/as composed to/as opposed to

- Reference [COAPCC]: s/Networks magazine/Communications magazine

Cheers,

Carles


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>         Title           : CoAP Latency Evaluation
>         Authors         : Fei Zheng
>                           Baicheng Fu
>                           Zhen Cao
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>         Date            : 2016-07-03
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