Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-11: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Hi, Thank you for this document. It is somewhat outside my area of expertise, but I do not see any network management related issues. One minor comment: 3.2. Usage scenarios There are different deployment and usage scenarios for CNNs. Some CNNs follow the star topology, whereby one or several hosts are linked to a central device that acts as a router connecting the CNN to the Internet. CNNs may also follow the multihop topology [RFC6606]. Perhaps: "Alternatively, CNNs may also follow ... ", otherwise it feels like this paragraph stops quite abruptly, whereas from the first couple of sentences I was expecting it to say a bit more about the different deployment scenarios. Regards, Rob _______________________________________________ Lwip mailing list Lwip@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lwip
